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Somebody tell me
New to the site (first day in camp) let me know if this post violates any rules that a newbie doesn't know. Or if I'm just wack, let me know that too.
Yo, if yall fresh to death, I must be decised.
All that weak shit you spit, you need to cease.
Say my name enough, can I get in like Mike Jones
Or touch a little boy, can I be on the news with Michael.
But the road I'm travelin', I just don't see it happenin'.
You can shake a magic 8, but you need balls for battlin'.
See, they got me frustrated, 'cause they won't let me in
Say I can't get a deal because I'm too light skinned.
Ain't that a sight boy - Won't sign a white boy.
They say "You got no immage but you can deffinately write boy"
..I got a list somewhat the same as his is..
Andre from OutKast, Jada, Kurupt, and Nas are all in
But Mos, Kwali, and Common are at the top of my shit.
Kanye west's spot is reserved but he's a border line racist.
And Jay-Z is retired now there's a hole in the business.
Shady and Kim are back together? Come on now what the hell is this?
Sombody tell me please...
Where in the hell have all the good rappers gone
And what the hell, is dude sayin' in that song
Money, Ho's and Rims can only last for so long
Yall need to let me in, You're doin' it all wrong
Sombody tell me please...
You see, my problem with rappin', is it's mostly just babblin'
Fake Thugs, fake Drugs, yip-yappin' when,
Back in the day I learned to spark trees from the Doc.
N.W.A. had ya boy like.."Fuck them cops"
Way back then, before Run became a reverend
I was like "Damn, to make it rappin' would be heaven"
But now-a-days rap just doesn't have the same feelin'
Like CD's is the new drug that they be dealin'.
Floodin' the streets with them same ol' beats.
I feel like the dope man just sold me some dank weed.
See, Pac had me wantin' to feel sorry for Brenda's baby.
Biggie's shit had me hyponitized - Actin' crazy.
But now all that we get is another song about Rims.
Rappers say they name a hundred times, I still don't know who he is.
..I swear to god I hear one more fake song..
I'm-a turn my fuckin radio off, There's something wrong.
Somebody tell me please...
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ups. I need help yall. Brand new to this shit. let me know how I stand
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Dude...
First off...thanks for peeping my shit...
Secondly...
I dunno if you wrote this...I swear it sounds very familiar...
I can even hear a beat in my head when I read it...like I've heard it before.
And that'd be the thing...this'd be something I heard...audio...
Cept for that Kim/Em line...that shit just happened yesterday or some shit.
But...
Saying you're not a biter...if this is your shit...
It's really fuckin good...for a basic, street type rhyme...for a hip hop rhyme.
I mean, the shit doesn't tell any story, no single event is at stake here.
It's just your opinion of the hip hop game right now...but that's cool too.
You pulled off a great flow...I can definitely hear this as audio...
(and still think I have, but whatever)
Good message, some decent name drops...
Real good shit.
I hope it was yours. I'd hate to have to ban you for biting...
(And I can do that kinda shit around here!)
But if it's yours...props...it's a real nice, bumpin kinda rhyme.
Peace
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Good flow, true words... real shit!
out
Shabs
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No not bitten. One line in there as a refrence point. The list from Andre to Nas was from a song. but only used to amplify the point. The beat in my head is similar to Jay-Z's "so I gotta make the song cry" I heard it the other day and this shits been rollin around in there takin shape. But thanks for the kind words.
