Filthy Habits

thiz iz a semi-done song im workin on




i got ma adrenaline caged,locked up
but ne bitch,fuck wit thiz shit they get chopped up
pigs come to me,wen the see niggaz get shot up
but im hip-hoppin neva stoppin till i get locked up
i smoke so much weed dat i cant see
people expectin shit frum me till i cant brethe
but if theres one thing in life that i must achive,
cant u see,i juss gotta get these filthy habits away frum me
day by day,grab a j,as i take a toke
the only way ta take ma mind off of bein broke
i wanna grab yo neck,sufficate an choke
yea talk shit NOW wit thiz barrel down yo throut
(chorus)
i tell myself that its ok
i tell myself one day this shit will go away
but it keeps commin back like whip lash,
i juss cant escape frum these filthy habits
(reapeat 1x)
(verse 2)
i tell myself i gotta stop with these filthy habits
i get controll of myself,but then im right back at it
to these filthy habits im like a fuckin magnet
stickin ta me like some weird fuckin magic
i wanna understand but i cant
oh god i wanna understand,but i cant
i wanna be the man,but i cant
no sweat drippin frum ma brow,as tha crowd starts ta chant
ma whole life i juss wanted ta be tha man
now it thousands of people i got thiz mic in ma hand
inside me iz boilin rage,
i cant remembe wut i put on the fuckin page
i stand silent bloods about ta be bled
im thinkin on how many tears ive shed
filthy habits commin back runnin thru ma head
i grab ma d.e an shoot everyone dead
(chorus x2)

dats all ive got so far....


LINKS:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...76#post3735076
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...83#post3728483

elevate no hate.

nun takin...it sounds way betta ova tha beat tho....uppin..peace-1

i understand it prolly does jus not a nice TEXT peice.

I Liked It mayne.. You had it good on da first verse but on da second verse I lost da attept of flow... It was good tho dont get me wrong.. Iight 1