Mic Master (feed Back)

It's Been A Couple Weeks So I'm Gone Do It Like This Listen Or Read Whatever.

Ya Gotta Problem Nigga Ya Better Come And Tell Me-
Or Ya Murder Will Be A Mystery Like Closet Songs From R.kelly
So Don't Be Beefin Cuz Ya Chick Like Marcelly I'll Give Her Right Back-after My Hours Are Done In The Telly>(hotel)

I Break Boys In Half Like Grahm Crackers-you Niggas Roles Are All Fake Like Camera Acters-ya Go Home And Check For Semin On Ya Damn Matress-cuz Me F*ckin Ya B*tch Is Ya Damn Fear Factor

My Click Is Animal They Call Us Zoo People-yeah I'm From Texas But I Don't Screw People-so What This Is America Home Of The City Of None Sleepas-also The Damn Home Where No One Is Treated Equal-haha Ya See My Flow Is Gettin Stepper-and I Know All My Fans Can't Wait For The Sequal

Guess What For Christmas I Got Guns From My Friends-i Call Them Gogo Guns Cuz They Clips Extend-okay Maybe My Raps Pretend But I Can Murder A Gimmick Rapper When My Flow Begins-vote For The Best New Artist Of The Year-my Name Should Be On The Ballot By A Square Make Sure You Put A X In.

Just Short A Sweet Keystyle Off The Head Rhymes Feedback Homies!

Not very good but ur tryin tho I see u just gettin the hang of it but it's cool
Work on ya flow and wordplay and u can get better

No bleh...you really need some sandpaper on your edges man...this drop was NEAR horrible...you had some good CONCEPTS but nothing real special...you really need to up your skill and take yourself to new levels...seriously...stay writing tho

~Nash

quit babblin

didnt like this drop
elevate everythin

keep tryin - dont stop cs of bad feed - i didnt and now i do alot better wrk than wen i started on here

agrees wit' Instigator and Nash...u need some elevations..........

u could also wrk on ya metas..they were all weak and forced
wrk on the flow, structure, and def wrk on multies.....
don't stop writing tho...PEACE

ewww.

not good at least ur trying work on ur flow,wordplay and u prolly might get better but for now ur whack