CAPPO's Freestyle

You put the G to the AY so try this
dawg i'm so ILL i'll stab you with an ice pick
and tha Ghetto Soldiers, thats my click
fuck wit us dawg i'll with u wit my dick
fuck your crew, your like the Devils Rejects
Raps as breakable as sticks and you write your rhymes onna Kleen-ex
you know whats hotta than Phoenix? Ghetto Soldiers, Raps harder then bricks
i don't care if you copy your Raps from slim shady
i'l still own you! dawg that wouldn't phase me
i grab my headphones and a mic
turn the speakers up bitch, your about to know what i'm like...

several different levels to step up to when your heads full
i got several different shovels to hit you with and make you fuckin brains spule
everytime you Rap its like you grab my ears and pull
cause it hurts to hear it dawg
...i write my raps in notes before it appears on your screen
you role blue blunts and smoke so when you rap its like old folk and a crapped machine
when you rap you choke like a fat dicks in your throat!
put your vocal on this silver spoon and fling
GS so ILL we'll shoot you in the face leave a bill and still get away clean without a trace
in a museum and jack the Monalisa out its case
put a chain around your girlfriends neck and lay ha
and i'd still be the Rap Slaya
the thing is with my Ghetto Soldiers
i start shit cause i guess i DO want em to chew on em
....YOUR CREW DAWG!

Ghetto Soldier Represent!

nah tryagain i mean it was aight but could be better

oh well, u gotta have a beat lol my bad
don't read it feel it

yo - it was straight...for a freestyle - it sounded like u spit it aggresive but that doesnt really convey ova the net so it doesnt carry the same effect as it would if niggaz heard it. Ya flow was aight and ya vocab need work - puches and structure was both sub par.... and fuck a beat nigga - u jus gotta learn how to show ur flow through ur typing - once u learn how to do that ya shyt'll get better.

Keep at it

yo thanks Tae Profit, what crew you in man

i WAS in True Royalty but the shit broke up so imma free agent right now

hmm think about joinin Ghetto Soldier, were in the process of having a site with forums.

yea aight - ill put thought to it - but a nigga bout to dip - so imma get at u

what u mean about to dip?

dipset - leave

this was ok if you're just beginning to rap but the whole my clic this and my clic is nothing more than the regular...and the hole imma hit you with this and that stuff is also regular, when freestyling (especially in real life) try thinking about stuff that is different and something you wouldn't think of daily or normally and shit will just fall together, atleast thats how it is for me when I just spit or battle in real life off the net...but with elevation you could get there.

thanks bro, i'll keep that in mind. well check out my other freestyle i posted