Hostile Mind [Topical]

breeding inteligence with a technological system of electron pulses//
living evidence, radiation only increases physcological convulsions//
expanded explosions within the nerves of any men posessed with//
initial urges to be a good samaritan,only writes him a death wish//
lurking into the innerworkings of a system so complexed,many who defy get exed//
drama only projects like aroused boy friends jerking on the next chick to convex//
encrypted codes burnt into skin,spiked hair standing on end,tailing a black trench coat//
broken words never get in,commands father his sin, within tha scripures his kin wrote//
hiding in shadows waiting for the next victim to grab and gag then throw to the fishes//
although revenge is sweet,he grasps souls and with every one becomes more vicious//
never enter the domain, of a reclusive being that contains tha power to mame//
picture baren walls,wrapped in rogue remains,jetting mounts with broken chains//
lanterns with open flames,fear exposed through pores,blood cold in veins//
shattered glass lay fallen from windows still attatched to broken panes//
anything triggers his wrath,so becareful with your manuvers it could be your last//
better creep by when you pass,one creak from tha floorboard,n he'll have your ass//

nice read. to make sense of it all i had to read it twice. it was good though, really good, i liked the rhyme structure u keep that up. nice way to expand your topic i think that u know what ur doing, nothing to improve on. keep rhyming.

is this a diss to my crew?????????

naw if it was a diss...i would of put that in the title...this is a point of view from the mind of a hostile person

ok cool i was jus checkin