RB Finest = What A Joke

they come out wiv shit come join our crew
but i will y'all advice just say screw bk 2 them
they will only use ya cuz they want u 2 diss
ppl they cant even diss themselves
they say that they give out gd raps
but y'all just a bunch of crap
after u dun the shit 4 them
they treat ya like shit
RB finest crew is so wack
and it needs a fuckin gd smack
they are fuckin slimes
just wanna waste da time
if u go wiv da crew
its only gd luck 2 ya
cuz i know u will b stuck
lookin 4 nu crew
after da shit that goes down
being in Rb Finest = the wackest crew

this da shit i ad 2 go through being in the RB Finest.

didnt really rhyme
flowd a bit
structure ws crap
no imagery
slight emotion
5/10

elevate
develop rhymin - make it more complex
make it longer - more words on a line
use more vocab
make it flow thruout

betta thn ur other piece
wont get as bad feed back

Haha...Ahh...no offence homie
but what is this....was there a point to it?
Elevate on everything..keep writin
try n get internal rhyming so it flows

thanx 4 ya comments i will take them on-board. more comments plz

This is absolute garbage, I mean fuck how hard is it to drop a decent OM, Shit it would take me no more than 5 minutes to drop a decent OM, yet you kids come in here and drop some waste of space shit like this. I do not allow diss verses in OM unless you are a respected member of the site or an elite head who could pull a dope one off. This was lousy as fuck and does not need to exist in our OM forum. Never diss anyone if you pressent garbage ass displays like this. Take it how you do, but no matter what this was an absolute waste of time. Did you even read this crap before posting? If so, why the fuck would you post something so retarded as this? Please do not post anythign in here until you are able to read the rules and come decent.

we all av 2 start from scrath like u did

No, I've always came at the same level ever since I was a member here (from my first ever OM to my last). It's a matter of skill, and until you posses some, stay out of here with that wackness. We have other areas for you to learn the damn basics and elevate, OM was always ment to showcase the sites talent.

i understand wot u sayin but i gotta get betta i agree

didnt like the topic..... no flow.... shitty rymes.....elevate.....

it could have been worse, but not much, just spend more time on it n dont thow it down like its a bowlin ball, spend more time on it an the results will be better

thanx vital i need more time on it. i just tried 2 diss ya crew but didnt work as good as i wanted it

OK, now go around the site and read some of the doper heads, get an idea of what is expected. Check out the old Sacrid Scriptures leagues, read those verse. Check the HoF, read and just work out your problems man. Elevate..

i will do thanx 4 ya advice

word vital and bounce r both rite
trust bounce, jus look how long hes been on
vital isnt in RB Finest (is he?)

bounce has made it clear