The Interview pt.1

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The Interview pt.1

Reporter: So, I been hearin you the new kid on the block, the new crazy ish around here, what’cha about? What it do?

b_rEEz:
Well im from h-town homie, and im married to my rhymes
Im holdin the .45, im to skilled for them nines
My lines are insane, I jus keep everyone guessin
Even 2pac before he died said I was impressin
I leave good impressions, on everyone who hates
Im only young and im already one of the greats
I do what it takes, to be the king of this game
And when I drop a beat aint no one complain
I refrain from throwin hits, and movin brick
I keep my mind on my rappin, not on my dick
I spit crazy fire, im like a dungeon dragon
I think high of myself cuz, don’t mean im braggin
People raggin my ass, sayin im played out
Well like T.I said, keep my name out’cha mouth
Im the king of the east, im the king of the west
Im the king of the south, hell homie im the best
My rhymes entwine to create a crazy story
Im crazy for bitches, but for rap im horny

I’ll be commin wit part 2 in a lil bit ya bois, so keep checkin, feedback ya’ll
Pece
-1-

normally i dont dig this style i deflect from commercialized material but you have a very angered attention demanding sound or shoul i say rhythm.
down falls your very basic in structure line usage and vocab
strong point youhave good ideas you have rhythm and a sound base to build this to more hype.

you have potential this is the ill shit i prefer but it isnt weak just at that median where it can go either way i feel you can do better.

up thiss ya'll need feedback so i can make part 2 phenominal.

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