Simple Flow

Simple Flow - MC Muggles aka Tru God

I'm about to rip shit up, worse than nasty flatulence,
your claimin to fuck me up?, bitch you practice abstinence,
I'm spitten simple writtens, while you sit around a meddle,
and all your swings are missen, like playgrounds in the ghetto,
let me keep it simple, not tryin to confuse you with my wordplay,
hate to pop you like a pimple, and lose you before your birthday,
abuse you in the worst way, and i'm just getting started,
my I.Q is off the charts, while your basically retarded,
your readin my rhymes thinkin, man this kid ain't lying,
with every word your dying, and i'm not even fuckin trying,
i'm gonna end it quick, so your family can plan your burial,
cuz the only time your sick, is when your dick caught venereal-


Just a simple little verse I put together while I was sitten here bored out my mind. Nothin spectacular but I had to get back into the swing of things it's been awhile.

Rise

nice rhymin, structure, flow
nice imagery
gd piece
u need to leave links to 2 pieces tht u've commented on
8/10

Word I guess i'll add the links to my sig. It will only get better I assure you. Rise.

what is this about ill battle you

Set up the thread dawg.

I loved it dude. Ya structure was consistent and ya rhymes were dope. My fav line was the swings missin/playgrounds in the ghetto line, lol.

Really good job 9/10

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Appreciate the replies guys. Keep em comin.

nothing on this worked... it was all forced or very basic... a lot of stuff was taken from other songs and worped into something else...
bad..

st8 flow

"The saying is misleading- or, maybe I need to dig a bit deeper
Death’s a creeper, slowly coming for me with a twisted demeanor
He’s on my doorstep ready to knock when I grab my soul with a shock
Suddenly I’m up and awake like large flock…"

and your tellin me mine is bad, if this is your best shit and ill assume it is cuz its in ur sig then u obviously didnt read that it took me 10 minutes to write this, if u wanna battle post a thread but don't tell me my shit is bad when i see nothing ill from u. Thanks for the critique though.

c'mon where I need more haters to critique my simple shit. Rise.

mc muggles i challenge you 2 a battle

^ Never make such a post in OM again!

its kinda tight if its a quick key
thinking on ya feet and shit its gud...
but if you took ya time then like ya said
its simplistick shit, but i liked ya wordplay regardless
stay up, peace