Mathematical Destruction

My Flow Is Unimaginable
I Guess It's What You Call Incalculable
Destroying MC's With Mathematical
Terms That Bring Confusion To The Brain
Because This Type Of Math Is The Kind That Inflicts Pain
Somethin To Make You Go Insane
Nothin To Laugh At
Just These Insane Lyrics And Trizapazoids
Bringin Tension To Your Eardrums
Like The Intense Variables That Come Out Of This MC's Voice
I Guess You Could Say I Have The Serum
Like Pythagorean Theorem
A Squared Plus B Squared Equals C Squared
Leave Your Vision Impared
The Next Thing You Know Your Feelin Scared
What My Next Spit Just Might Be
But Dont Feel Strange
It All Make You Feel Deranged
All These Variables, Numbers And Formulas Runnin Through Your Brain
So Let Me Leave You With These Words That Will Make You A Little Insane
Im Not Askin You To Envy Me, Just Remember The Name
And How You Got Ripped By A Punk From The Twelvth Grade

Im lookin for some feedback, this is my 4th ever freestyle.

you need elevatoin alot, work on your wording, and your imagry yo, and work on your creativty..

That shit was like...Revenge of the Nerds or some shit. I agree, you need to work on your rhyme scheme and your general structure. If i need to do some trig i'll come to u tho dude

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Haha, actually I failed math this semester. But, yeah thanks for the feedback. I just thought Itd be a different topic.

It was different tho, i'll give you that. It's a change from all that 'gats and clips' shit, ya know?....

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