Puzzled thoughts....

:2thumb: BY bobericc....Dic-tion-ar-y....and other puzzled minds.... :2thumb:


verses will b dropped within 2 hourz






http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...77#post3566377

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3566388

the love...the hate of these puzzled thoughts
the place far from reality where right from wrong's sought
mistakes are made...but pieces together, and never a knot
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:speaker: whos to say the complexity of thoughts are simple???
all those in oppose...have plans sorted like "wheres my thimble"
my ways of explainin are far out...like horizon's through windows
our theories tip below ur average minds, like we'z playin limbo
our puzzled ideas come from the deepest emotions of gangta~life
see...we thinking before we rape and suffocate gangtaz~wifes
our secretive thinking connects to many things...Dots u cant follow
feel da rhymin part...skin deep, only if u knew how dese tips iz hollow
i describe the detail of human life...life-like...sumtimes w/ sergical knifez
im the craziest mo'fuccer, wit the iron first to set any wrong nigga rite
judgin like Dredd...drop my heavy spiked mallet over a puzzled~HEAD
dis santa aint got presents in his sled...bodies in blacc bags instead
glory beholdz the next nigga to decieve me...ur puzzlement'll drown
ill make u da chiccen crossing a rode, watz next? riddler owns da crown
my theory iz that the heart pumps solely so the brain smaccs
ill leave the audience clappin guns and hands for my puzzled act :speaker:

Ayo that shit was dope as fuck imma probably drop in a little while

the love...the hate of these puzzled thoughts
the place far from reality where right from wrong's sought
mistakes are made...but pieces together, and never a knot

Look my mind so puzzled that all i can do is destroy
they say i'm ill going into war wit my son as a decoy
i'm puzzled and shocked knowin dudes out to gut me
and not caring about no mother fucker on earth..but me
I walk onto the battle fields with no click and no gun
my mind puzzled and confused but still scared of no one
i know i'm bout to die so i role up some...trees.....
got enemies watchin but there hands cant fuck wit these
it's always the little ones to start some trouble
while my mind puzzled and i'm high so i'm seeing a double
before he can talk he had blood pouring out his lip quick
i hit him with a brick i'm in the wrong set so i try to leave quick
I'm so puzzled and confused not thinkin bout the danger face me
i'm just feelin so good as his five brothers chase me
my body feeling hot,and my chess start to sweat,my shirt getin wet
But i wont stop running till i make it back to my set
i run in my house lock and load ready to let them things explode
make a couple phone calls tell my boys get ready to role
You know we in the car crusin back to the enemy set
and the hole car strap wit nines ready to make a enemie wet
i use to act hard now its time to prove my act now
as my mind puzzling i have thoughts to back down
we cutt the lights let the car role straight down there street
when i pulled out the heat dudes start ducking in trash cans like
oscar from seasame street
i know they saw the shit we tote but still my gun stuck his face
to his door like a sticky note

yo itee ya'll here's mine....

nice verse homie

itee.... Look.....

My words, from crazy minds, hit n fuck up minds,
so quick, so deadly, swallow this sick "tip", but it's not even from a "9",
fuck bein kind, im heated,.....piss still boilin,
i been past dat point.....Im new but still spoilin,
nigga,...just get it, relax, swallow some coffee,
because if u don't, u'll swallow red cells 2 get off me,
so follow me, im da leader......my mind has been mixed,
so ima take a second........oops u "shot", There's yo fix,
i don't flinch, twitch, i just watch the blood splatter,
Im so "Vain", feelin so much pain, nothin 2 gain, so ima touch n watch a nigga shatter,
it's just da Puzzled reaper, corrupted finger "Tip" of destruction,
u bust from my combustion, LL, got bitch's hushin, so wen shit rushin,
it's a guaranteed 2 leave a concusion, so stop fussin n rest n peace,
I'll swallow yo brain, spitted it out deformed n mixed, It'll b puzzled burnin underneath...

nice shyt

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when i freewrite most of my lyrics... that just sounds ridiculouse...
but not bad... take out the pictures and shit... work on the flow a bit
and try to increase your vocab... not bad at all though... just nothing speical...
keep at it bro.

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=254738

this was a good collab............

bobericc- u had a flow going, but at some pointr i got lost. vocab was great. ur structure was clear as well. the problem was that you need to make your piece more visionary...7.7/10

pusha c- you had an ok flow, and i like your structure. very understandable.really clear as well. vocab needs to extend more, everything else was good....good drop
6.6/10
dic-tio-nary- you had an off flow, good vision. also need to improve with the vocab, your structure was clear, your concept was ok to uderstand.....6/10

this was a good topic to talk about, your group. thats good.. but good luCC wit ya crew. and i hope you keep writing.....overall= 7/10

WoRD^^

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