Skrollz (0-0) vs Barburyin (0-0)

LLL Jr. Week 2

Word

first week went kinda well no shows are gone and cats who showed and who signed up are now in...

same as last week check by wednesday drop by friday come good....if your opponent fails to check but shows then that will be allowed but they will be deducted 2 votes for failure to check.....
so all in all you MUST drop a verse this week.....

last of all voting.....im scrapping the 4 links this week, unless voting activity goes then this is how it will stay and if i catch anyone feeding off the first vote you will have votes deducted...constant offence then i'll boot your ass from the league.....


good luck all

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check

Check...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=252816&page=2
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...83#post3551383
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...23#post3551423
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...44#post3551444

We don't respect anything about ya, you ain't bringin a might
..................Cuz it's been Eetablished..
that ur hands down the worst emcee on the site
Cause your like last week's trash, this League ain't for you, see
A bitch is meant to play dead, and skrollz is lying in front of me
do u actually think dat your dope..................herb please
.....................u been here since 03'................................
and yet you still barely qualify for this junior league
all your past verses were wack so trash is what we'l call it
u stopped tryin 2 sell yoself as an emcee cuz nobody bought it
i must admit i have seen u drop dope..must be somethin u bit
..............The creation of skrollz wasn't considered wack......
its just a death curse on whoever decided to creat it

k

get off my dick man, what you do? study my past
you and dope dont add up, like stupid kids doin math
i asked around bout B, dudes like that cats a geeek
cuz bar couldn't drop dope, losing a sac of weed
practice is something you need, dont throw a hissy fit
i beat dope cats.. only dope cat u beat... well he dont exist
fake personals dont win battles, none of the shit u said was true
and you cant be wack. cuz wack wants to be you
you never seen a booth, respect the warning kid
cuz he love comin from behind, like Jordan Did
you a fake homie, you aint close to slick in the game
cuz u bout to se L'Z like the middle of my name



blah

We don't respect anything about ya, you ain't bringin a might
..................Cuz it's been Eetablished..
that ur hands down the worst emcee on the site
played
Cause your like last week's trash, this League ain't for you, see
A bitch is meant to play dead, and skrollz is lying in front of me
lmao.....more like it
do u actually think dat your dope..................herb please
.....................u been here since 03'................................
and yet you still barely qualify for this junior league
ok punch,....word better
all your past verses were wack so trash is what we'l call it
u stopped tryin 2 sell yoself as an emcee cuz nobody bought it
lol,....not good to rhyme same words(it,it)
i must admit i have seen u drop dope..must be somethin u bit
..............The creation of skrollz wasn't considered wack......
its just a death curse on whoever decided to creat it
meh closer,.....u rhymed it already

ya verse was a lil above average, but your lines were stretched as fuck, and the miss-use of the ...... made ya flow fuck'd up at times,....i've seen u do better,.....way better,....don't kno wha happened here

vs

get off my dick man, what you do? study my past
you and dope dont add up, like stupid kids doin math
add up lines are played,...still used good tho
i asked around bout B, dudes like that cats a geeek
cuz bar couldn't drop dope, losing a sac of weed
drop dope lines are played
practice is something you need, dont throw a hissy fit
i beat dope cats.. only dope cat u beat... well he dont exist
lame diss
fake personals dont win battles, none of the shit u said was true
and you cant be wack. cuz wack wants to be you
lol
you never seen a booth, respect the warning kid
cuz he love comin from behind, like Jordan Did
lol
you a fake homie, you aint close to slick in the game
cuz u bout to se L'Z like the middle of my name
ok closer

ya verse had some played lines, but some was excicuted well so that's a plus, structure was iight, flow was coo,....overall not a bad verse, seen u do better aswell


V/barb

We don't respect anything about ya, you ain't bringin a might
..................Cuz it's been Eetablished..
that ur hands down the worst emcee on the site
Eh, Weak. And you spelt established wrong =(
Cause your like last week's trash, this League ain't for you, see
A bitch is meant to play dead, and skrollz is lying in front of me
Um. Nah
do u actually think dat your dope..................herb please
.....................u been here since 03'................................
and yet you still barely qualify for this junior league
haha, Funny. All the "..." look homo though
all your past verses were wack so trash is what we'l call it
u stopped tryin 2 sell yoself as an emcee cuz nobody bought it
Blah.
i must admit i have seen u drop dope..must be somethin u bit
..............The creation of skrollz wasn't considered wack......
its just a death curse on whoever decided to creat it
Not feelin' it

I know your better than this. Come with fresher concepts son.

Vs

get off my dick man, what you do? study my past
you and dope dont add up, like stupid kids doin math
Wak son.
i asked around bout B, dudes like that cats a geeek
cuz bar couldn't drop dope, losing a sac of weed
The whole dope/weed concept is played to death
practice is something you need, dont throw a hissy fit
i beat dope cats.. only dope cat u beat... well he dont exist
haha...NO
fake personals dont win battles, none of the shit u said was true
and you cant be wack. cuz wack wants to be you
Gay
you never seen a booth, respect the warning kid
cuz he love comin from behind, like Jordan Did
Eh.
you a fake homie, you aint close to slick in the game
cuz u bout to se L'Z like the middle of my name
Nope.

You dropped played as fuck man. Come with fresh material next week.

Overall you both came very played. Like I said you both need to come with fresher concepts. However, I @ least left good feed on one of Barb's punches so..

v//Bar

barbnice punches, dope punches matter of fact, nice structure, dope personals, nice job..

vs

skrollz, you didnt beat barb but you did good in this one, dope perspective on the punches, nice personals, good job, but try with more creativyt next time..

v..barb

We don't respect anything about ya, you ain't bringin a might
..................Cuz it's been Eetablished..
that ur hands down the worst emcee on the site
ok-ish, not whack but kinda weak.
Cause your like last week's trash, this League ain't for you, see
A bitch is meant to play dead, and skrollz is lying in front of me
ok-ish
do u actually think dat your dope..................herb please
.....................u been here since 03'................................
and yet you still barely qualify for this junior league
better, this was an aight personal punch.
all your past verses were wack so trash is what we'l call it
u stopped tryin 2 sell yoself as an emcee cuz nobody bought it
i dont like it, looked like a bad attempt at wordplay 2 me.
i must admit i have seen u drop dope..must be somethin u bit
..............The creation of skrollz wasn't considered wack......
its just a death curse on whoever decided to creat it
nah weak closer and stretched

Not good enough imo. All your punches except one, were either just "ok-ish" or completely weak. You need to come alot harder, and ive read better from you. Structure and flow was fine but u know that, just make them punches harder next week. Your 3rd bar was no doubt your best line.

vs

get off my dick man, what you do? study my past
you and dope dont add up, like stupid kids doin math
okish kinda weak tho like ur opponents opener
i asked around bout B, dudes like that cats a geeek
cuz bar couldn't drop dope, losing a sac of weed
People are right telling u the whole 'couldnt drop dope' is played, but i still feel that u did a bad job of it even if it wasnt.
practice is something you need, dont throw a hissy fit
i beat dope cats.. only dope cat u beat... well he dont exist
nah
fake personals dont win battles, none of the shit u said was true
and you cant be wack. cuz wack wants to be you
I thought this was ok first time i read it, but then i thought about it, If whack wants to be him, that means he is better than whack??
you never seen a booth, respect the warning kid
cuz he love comin from behind, like Jordan Did
This was ok but still kinda weak not hittin hard enough
you a fake homie, you aint close to slick in the game
cuz u bout to se L'Z like the middle of my name
weak closer

I was surprised at how weak u came. Had u down as a prediction and everythin but u came too weak. No decent punches, best bar was probably ur opener, and that still wasnt more than "ok-ish". U need to make your punches hit alot harder next week because if u do the same again u will get beat with no votes imo after losing to a weak verse.

V/ barburyin.
For at least one aight bar worth quoting, and overall better verse with less "Weak" punches and more "ok-ish punches"
Both need to come harder though.

Bab- I don't know. Your verse was eh ok. I wasn't feeling your punches. Your flow was bad. Structure was also off. You came a lil played. Your first 2 lines were played. Aint much to say but elevate. Overall 6/10

Skrollz- I felt you could've came better. Your punches were a lil played. That weed and dope conept is old and played. Your flow and structure was better. OVerall 7.5/10

V-Skrollz

barburyin wins

Skrollz (0-1)
Barburyin (1-0)