Spitflames (0-1) vs Def Wok (0-1)

LLL Jr. Week 2

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first week went kinda well no shows are gone and cats who showed and who signed up are now in...

same as last week check by wednesday drop by friday come good....if your opponent fails to check but shows then that will be allowed but they will be deducted 2 votes for failure to check.....
so all in all you MUST drop a verse this week.....

last of all voting.....im scrapping the 4 links this week, unless voting activity goes then this is how it will stay and if i catch anyone feeding off the first vote you will have votes deducted...constant offence then i'll boot your ass from the league.....


good luck all

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check...lets go 12

check going 10.

I'll go 10 wit u

This niggas poor, looks to make money, so ya go into rap
Cuz I play games with cats, while ya still stuck in the mouse trap
Hah its clear ur a herb, spitflames"15" really explains you
Cuz back when I was one i threw numbers in my name too
This little herbs shit, ya got shit for brains, with a lot to learn about
Cuz ya filled with water, how it only takes 15 second to put flames spit out
Your ass, were does that gay shit come from, he must of fell off a tree
Cuz every1 gets lucky, but how the FUCK someone this WACK can be 19-3
So son ya need to stop, fucking foster bitch dude
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Cuz theres the list of all the crews that want you

Nigga shit is basic...verse wouldn't be complex if it was trig
Besides yo punches dont connect like the bullet shot in yo sig
Fool ass nigga...how you get caught using the same punch twice*
Def Wok rhymes wouldn't work out if they was a excercisin device
Def Wok wanted to be a def writer so he joined def dreams
Crew got a forum...and dropped him like a track by the supremes*
This bitch a nobody...need to come out of his herb shell
Cause this kid got a lot of talent...compared to a sperm cell
Look u've battled noobs and herbs and tried to jump into a league
Cause when u key...yo verses borin..yo punches leave no 1 intrigued


*He used a punch from his puch league in one of his battles and got caught
*supremes= old motown group that dropped plenty hot songs in they time

Hah its clear ur a herb, spitflames"15" really explains you
Cuz back when I was one i threw numbers in my name too
nice
Your ass, were does that gay shit come from, he must of fell off a tree
Cuz every1 gets lucky, but how the FUCK someone this WACK can be 19-3
true

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Besides yo punches dont connect like the bullet shot in yo sig
barely quoted this, and could have ben executed much better[B]

v/Def

This niggas poor, looks to make money, so ya go into rap
Cuz I play games with cats, while ya still stuck in the mouse trap
Hah its clear ur a herb, spitflames"15" really explains you
Cuz back when I was one i threw numbers in my name too
Your ass, were does that gay shit come from, he must of fell off a tree
Cuz every1 gets lucky, but how the FUCK someone this WACK can be 19-3

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Nigga shit is basic...verse wouldn't be complex if it was trig
Besides yo punches dont connect like the bullet shot in yo sig

lol

V/ Def Wok

Pretty easy

This niggas poor, looks to make money, so ya go into rap
Cuz I play games with cats, while ya still stuck in the mouse trap

Didn't like this concept.

Hah its clear ur a herb, spitflames"15" really explains you
Cuz back when I was one i threw numbers in my name too

Wording was way too simple.

This little herbs shit, ya got shit for brains, with a lot to learn about
Cuz ya filled with water, how it only takes 15 second to put flames spit out

Didn't like this.

Your ass, were does that gay shit come from, he must of fell off a tree
Cuz every1 gets lucky, but how the FUCK someone this WACK can be 19-3

This was just stated, but it actually hit well.

So son ya need to stop, fucking foster bitch dude
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Cuz theres the list of all the crews that want you

This was decent as well.


Nigga shit is basic...verse wouldn't be complex if it was trig
Besides yo punches dont connect like the bullet shot in yo sig

Cool concept and decent punch but better wording would have improved it definitely.

Fool ass nigga...how you get caught using the same punch twice*
Def Wok rhymes wouldn't work out if they was a excercisin device

Nah, pretty played.

Def Wok wanted to be a def writer so he joined def dreams
Crew got a forum...and dropped him like a track by the supremes*

Too simple.

This bitch a nobody...need to come out of his herb shell
Cause this kid got a lot of talent...compared to a sperm cell

Concept was too weak to hit.

Look u've battled noobs and herbs and tried to jump into a league
Cause when u key...yo verses borin..yo punches leave no 1 intrigued

The setup probably could have been reworded and used as the punch, as the actual punchline didn't hit at all.


Def's final 2 bars were pretty cool and won this for him as Spit's concepts were too simple and his wording was too weak.

v/ Def Wok

let's get some votes

Def Wok: Didn't really feel your tone at all, but you were consistent in material throughout.

Spitflames 15: Blah concepts, OK rhyme, your best line 'yo punches dont connect like the bullet shot in yo sig' wasn't anything special.

Vote: Def Wok, just a stronger drop.

Def wins

Def Wok (1-1)
Spitflames (0-2)