Aerial vs E.z. eddie

50 lines
due in 1 hour
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(300 posts to vote)
topic: " the unexpected hijacking "

and my bad,e.z, eddie wanted it unlimited lines so it's any amount of lines

Boarding the plane with only sunshine on my mind
I entered the aircraft now leaving our shores behind
I usually get bored in time with these lengthy flights
So the idea of sleeping pills was a tempting sight
A significant fight to resist but the desire was there
With the pop of a few pills I was no longer there
Hidden n shared within the depths of my dreams
I swear though I was hearing piercing screams
Awoken from cloud beams and tedious quietness
Eyes opened slowly, only to see bloodshed n violence
And a man standing ova a body with gun in hand
Blood smeared chairs, all chaos from but one man
But I didn’t understand, what was his purpose
What was his reason for doing god a disservice?
More to the surface, but what was his reason
From the body count it looked like hunting season
Now fitted for treason an obviously lacked a soul
I looked around to see who would crack then fold
Or attack as bold, but faces where cold n frightened
The man paced the aisle, my spine just tightened
I took a look at his face, and then terror struck
If it was who I suspected, we were out of luck
He then stood on a chair, ready to give the orders
Pointed his gun at aisles and divided us to quarters
The purpose? Unsure of…I crawled to my position
Talking to other survivors, they new our opposition
Alquaeda trained proposition was who we faced
An with a bomb strapped, time now became a race
“Was this our fate?” I whispered to the other survivors
“If we go down trying at least people will admire us”
But will require us to take fate into our own hands
He fired a shot, signaling he was ready for his plan
He told us to stand and moistened his lips to speak
“Your about to make history, without limbs to treat”
“Or souls to keep for this plane is on course for death”
Almost choked on breath, learning the planes intention
Heading towards parliament house was his suggestion
I then gave the signal, getting ready to rush this man
Eyes circled waiting moments for the drop of my hand
20 odd now rushed to stand and charge an attack
Bullet shells flying, I expected one through my back
Or one to tack n wound while people die left n right
Dodging bullets I stepped, steadied n lept with might
The leap took me right to his rib cage, flawing him
Right then, 12 others attacked n started mauling him
Noticing a hand free, he reached for the detonator
If we couldn’t stop him now, there would be no later
Then a second of silence, time froze to slow speed
The button armed, the plane shook below me
The grim reaper appeared n was ready to follow me
Body started hollowing my soul started to wonder
Innocent lives saved while still dieing with honor

It was unexpected, so rapid couldnt believe we could be so level headed
We were rollin undeteced police couldnt catch us it was like they were farsighted
Driven down the street craken up we scared that nigga so bad he shited
Hear police sirens but this niggas car aint tiren were drunk firen
shoot randomly now a little girls on da concrete dyin
Were hi, laughin so hard we cryin
Theres 3 police now they catchin up as if the car we hijacked was there niece
I lose control of the wheel now we slippen like we on grease
We crash into anotha car we imoble but all or adreniline dose is increase
Get outta the car an run but 1 of my niggas decides to take his gun and scream u wanna piece
Now hes deceased his heart cease to beat
Im runnin across the street beaten my feet im a mutha fuckin true athlete
My hearts like a constant drum beat I think i can go for ever but i slip on sleet
on the ground thinkin why did we jump that dude and take hijack ride
Niggas still in the the trunk of the ride. Why did we not abide by the rules god provides
If i get caught i definitly will do suicide. nigga could be dead i could be charged with homicide
I get up i swear i wont be caught. i say to myself ill hide on the mountin side
I hear shots fired i new my homies wont have to worry about the freedom ill desire
thell be hired by saten to do watever he requires
I hear my friends voices in my head sayin die ur gonna go to hell i scream
liar
liar
I crawl into the forest and ask god please help me im a good diplomatist
Here police dogs wishin i was a anesthetist ( some 1 who makes anestetics)
They jump on me tear me up tryin 2 tear me up to shreds
Can tell these dogs are true thurobred
Ahead i here the police instead of fighten i lay down cause i kno im dead
Im pressed with charges im in all my life
Dude died so the eletric chair is the one 2 end my life
sitten in the room thinkin how i coulda had a wife
They turn the switch i have a minute and thats the limit
I think of the the hijack
How did i lack lose my tracks
We were drunk we didnt mean to be stealen
We were just tryin 2 have some fun but the dude wont eva be healen
This is tryfilen How did it escalate to we taken this dudes car locken him in da trunk. how did we have so many people dynen
well its all in da past cause now im on my way past heaven goin to meet that bitch
Saten

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v/aerial
feeling ur verse
liked ur flow kept me interested structure was good keep doin ur thang
e.z.eddie work on ur structure flow another things u'll get better in time

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Damn, this battle had me sleeping. LOL. anyway, vote=aerial, better drop.

vote on this battle and then i will vote on this thnx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=252100

I am just saying, since I can not vote, AErial had a better verse, just stating my two sense ya know?

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