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little keystyle
links
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=248261
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3435442
yo like neo in the matrix i can read between the lines//
spittin lyrical Bullets to tear and shred ya minds//
so you got 9 cats with 5 gats each//
you wont see no blood like a blind dead leech//
my flows so sick i think my keyboard just coughed//
you little girls are like sex with pillows fuckin soft//
only the 7th bar and already my opponents are foldin
I guess im a fucked up youth to much parental scolding//
i know this is a small drop but i need some fuckin sleep//
not like it matters i'll prolly only get one peep//
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flow was a bit off, and ya structure is real fucked up.....BUT that first line was quite nice and caught my attention..it is pretty played bout neo and shit..but that was aight...the vocab was str8, but you could work on adding some multi's in here...
overall is was ok, average, 5/10..................stay-up 1
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this was serious bullshit
you need some improvement because what ever you were tryna do, it was not working and the flow was off and this had no actual point to it.
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I didn't like it that much....flow was off and rhymes was basic...best line was the pillow one which doesn't say much for the rest of the drop....had potential though...work with imagery and elevate then drop again....keep flowin.
-Play-Boy
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