Hey MA!

Basically a free verse i have written




I seen you from a mile away, smile as wide as day
blue kool aide smile, over a girl ,should i cry this way?
vehicles......two tired , i guess this is the midas way
should i think or take mine this way , with our timeless play
inconsistantant rhymes misplace, smooth sounds like chimes that grace
no clocks, i can take you to a timeless place infinite...if you grace it right
i love pacing right, these words will embrace ya life basic like tastin ice
Shoes will never be a waste of life, i stand beyond a eclipse praise the light
replace this life with sexing with faulty ho's, but all we know
With my word's i could draw a painting of an evolving rose
For you , but what i find appuling tho everytime i see you, continue stalling yo
Sweetest since peaches and herb , leavin them herbs
grounded, you're voice once sounded like birds tweaking
the sunlight you are, hot as day left the curb leaking


Will get links soon

upp

this was iight..i mean this was quick..( too short)...the strucutee was off most of the time..rhymes were iight...a lil too simple....vocab was good...in sum places ( a few lines) had sum good....flow was not smooth..it was choppy most of the time...jus keep elevating...peace

Uppin, i think this was dope man...

feeling this shit we should do a collab trust I'm nice with songs like this ..............ne way had good strcture good line's and wordplay I liked this,was feeling the vibe.....pm me bout that collab trust I ain't a noob scrub

uppin