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Got That Sumthin
All those niggaz alwayz say i got that sumthin
maybe they were high when we where bluntin
I have no clue but i have the greatest gift
look ladies, i got the greatest magic stick
oh yea- oh yea, i got that charm magically
i can make sex turn into a fuckin tradgety
i'll make all the jealous niggaz be mad at me
I got that sumthin you know what it is..
pop- pop- pop like a bottle of Dr. Fizz..
i had this sumthin ever since a was a kid
Dont be hatin dont be jealous of me....
cuz G, it just came to me naturally.....
and all the girls now are alwayz after me
(chorus x 2)
I got that sumtin you know that stuff
my gift is big and really, really tough
we can get on anytime you like
and i'm ready to sexually strike (o yea)
These girl are all over me like i'm a celebrity
and all the girls wishin they were in bed wit me
This life is better than Skribble's no doubt
now lyric's life is what i'm talkin about
sexy gift and you know i got that thing
that can make your sex rages do DING!
i got bling bling up to the sky, no lie
why would i lie, i'm seriosuly a real guy
dont deny this life is seriosuly really good
way better than poppin gats in da hood
all you know is that i got that sumthin
and now you can hear that bed thumpin
in the apartement, wakin neighbors
i have glow in the dark condoms..
i can play light sabors, i got darth vador's
yea-yea...i no what this chick like
and she know what my dick's like
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First things first. Don't write in small font, it's extremely irritating and makes your shit hard to read. Having said that...
You had pretty good flow throughout. That was the best part of your verse, and the only good part really. Otherwise, it's nothing I haven't seen a billion times before. Shit about being a ladies man and a ganster gets real fucking boring, especially if you read the more unique shit in here.
So yea..good flow, just work on dropping more unique pieces.
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Woa..multies were pretty good....i'm impressed wit dat....umm....the rhymes were good....topic was a lil too firmiliar......but you made this peice seem better than the other ones i've seen....nice flow..smooth and strcuutre was even all the way...verses were good...chorus was cool...goodd rop overall 8.5/10...keep it up..peace
