"MY FLOWZ HOT"

i heard some niggaz say they thought i was weak you niggaz is CRAZY,yall garbage like brendas BABY
i got the light like a CANDLE STICK/my flow so hot i spit in the mic and disMANTLE IT
my flow hotter than the core of the EARTH/yo rhymes dont even exsist like a paycheck for a hoe on the FIRST
im hotter than dogs in mating SEASON,me without hot rhymes now that'll be the day that satan starts FREEZING
you just a HOMO at home eating on HO HO's your carrers going in SLO-MO cuz you sing more than JOJO
yo rhyme is SO-SO the only reason your signed is FO SHOW your whole being is fake your a clown like BOZO
you kats lyrically think you can handle me your not ready im a RUFF RYDER/and i run these streets just like a BUS DRIVER
and im the truth like them non smoking COMMERCIAL ADDS/i spit real hip-hop you do COMERCIAL RAP
like weed heads smoking im getting you HIGH/i wanna flow like talib kweli so i can be the one thats getting you BY
i cause pandemonium like B2K/you haters pray for my downfall but thats not gone B 2 DAY
i got c-section flow cuz i got yall OPEN/you reminice on my rhymes like T.R.O.Y. cuz i keep yall QUOTING
my rhymes hot like LAVA FLOWS and even yo MAMA KNOWS this rap shit should be a profession (why dough)cuz IM A PRO
my flow so hot i could spit in REVERSE/church in lying your now off body you carrying HURST
fucking with doughboy youll get ya BACK BENT/its hard to understand what you saying its like you got a german ACCENT
but i spit CLEARLY/you niggaz want hot rhymes but when i spit it you kats dont HEAR ME
my flows hotter than clothes bums sell in the STREETS/your rhymes not even luke warm they lacking heat so your flow is so BLEEK/dont judge my hot flow nigga fuck a CRITIQUE/my flows hotter the a flamethrower the games over niggaz taste your DEFEAT


THE ILLEST NIGGA ALIVE

Yo Nice Rap Dude...I Like The Multi's Here...Structure Was All Over The Screen Though..Good Thing You Capitalized The Rhyming Words...Some Street Shit Here Nice Going Dude. Check My Song Out

i heard some niggaz say they thought i was weak you niggaz is CRAZY,yall garbage like brendas BABY
little played out but alright opener

i got the light like a CANDLE STICK/my flow so hot i spit in the mic and disMANTLE IT
pretty nice, uppin urself.

my flow hotter than the core of the EARTH/yo rhymes dont even exsist like a paycheck for a hoe on the FIRST
imaginative, good thinking.

im hotter than dogs in mating SEASON,me without hot rhymes now that'll be the day that satan starts FREEZING
one of my favourite lines in ur spit. hot.

you just a HOMO at home eating on HO HO's your carrers going in SLO-MO cuz you sing more than JOJO
yo rhyme is SO-SO the only reason your signed is FO SHOW your whole being is fake your a clown like BOZO
nice multi-use, might've gone for 2 long but defientely good work here.

you kats lyrically think you can handle me your not ready im a RUFF RYDER/and i run these streets just like a BUS DRIVER
once again imaginative. good work.

and im the truth like them non smoking COMMERCIAL ADDS/i spit real hip-hop you do COMERCIAL RAP
ouch.......

like weed heads smoking im getting you HIGH/i wanna flow like talib kweli so i can be the one thats getting you BY
i cause pandemonium like B2K/you haters pray for my downfall but thats not gone B 2 DAY
good work here. nice ending

i got c-section flow cuz i got yall OPEN/you reminice on my rhymes like T.R.O.Y. cuz i keep yall QUOTING
nice

my rhymes hot like LAVA FLOWS and even yo MAMA KNOWS this rap shit should be a profession (why dough)cuz IM A PRO
nice multi-use agian. even if my mama knows dun't bring her in this. jks.

my flow so hot i could spit in REVERSE/church in lying your now off body you carrying HURST
nice job here, feelin it.

fucking with doughboy youll get ya BACK BENT/its hard to understand what you saying its like you got a german ACCENT
but i spit CLEARLY/you niggaz want hot rhymes but when i spit it you kats dont HEAR ME
nice play on with urself, i like dis here.

my flows hotter than clothes bums sell in the STREETS/your rhymes not even luke warm they lacking heat so your flow is so BLEEK/dont judge my hot flow nigga fuck a CRITIQUE/my flows hotter the a flamethrower the games over niggaz taste your DEFEAT
nice ending man, good spit, its hot overall.


THE ILLEST NIGGA ALIVE
wouldn't say the illest but defiently urstarting to heat shit up.


i kept my opinion simple and right to the point, hope u appreciate it, peace, look out for my work oventually.

wun

um........this was pretty good..multies galor was really impressvie but strcuutre was foo and theb flow was pretty good but not perfect,,,rhymes weree good....topic was cool..coiuld hvae been better chosen but i liked it...i liked the metaphors is this,,nicely done..good drop..peace

yea not bad for a newb, flow was ight, creativity was aight, you need to elavate on complexity, and rhyming was aight, keep working at it kid you got potential....

yo thankz 4 the feedbak yall

Flow wasn't bad.. i thought the structure was alright cuz the rhymes seemed to fall into place at the right time.. your use a grip of metaphors.. had some decent ones in there fo sho.. as far as suggestions i would say try to add a little wordplay to the metaphors, so they aren't so blatent.. i dont know about the sickest nigga alive or whatever but this wadn't too bad.. you seem to fit the more battle style type lyrics..i be interested to see what kind of punches you come with.. ay, if you could drop a vote in this battle of mine id appreciate it... shits gettin crazy slept on... peace

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=245426

It was nice, vocab was alright had some good multis in there keep elevating always room some improvement

thnx

Brenda's baby was from one of Cass lines I think don't quote me.
But other than that it was hot structure was off but everything else was cool.
Keep droppin' shit.

needs legit title