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Me......
Didnt go up in the projects today
Had a nice house so what can I say
Nice family, good friends it was ok
Not a gangster but people think so
They talk shit and no one knows
A little white kid couldnt be like me
People gunna judge for what they see
Baggy pants and a shirt size to big
Thats what I wear thats what I dig
They say I pack heat carry a gun
They thinks its games they think its fun
Words hurt but it dont get the best of me
I dont really care dont give a shit
They musta forgot who they messin wit
I made a couple rhymes for some laughs
They say that I wack and I cant rap
What can I say people talk some smack
Never heard them spit a single rhyme
This aint my life just in my spare time
People dont know me, I'm like T.I.
Most dangerous weapon is peoples eyes
It leads to conclusion and they aint right
Keep to myself stayin up all night
Workin at this game puttin up a fight
Some of its lame and I admit it
I may be garbage but its how i spit it
I will succed it this game im willin to try
Untill the day I die, im take whats mine
As a first O.M. I want people to know me
Cuz its like John Cena says You Just Cant See ME
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I know its pretty lame so give me some tips and what to work on......
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Lol Good Shit Used That Good Day From Ice Cube Beat Huh Chea I Know..Fix Your Bars Up Try Leveling It Out...Don't Use Three Words For Three Line's Make It Even..Vocab Was Okay Could Of Bin Better Lyrics We're Nice Here,,,,Structure Good Keep It Up
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ehhhhhhhh........ very basic ......got the concept.... its cool but everything else is ehhhh....blah............... try some more metas next time .......<-- to start
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i wasnt really feelin this one..topic was not that interesting
flow was aiight..strucutre was wicked good but still not too good
vocab was weak..complexity wasnt here..it seemed elementary rhymes
upp everything from this drop like better vocab and ext. keep elevating
oveerall 6.7/10..keep elevating..peace
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