14 lines
Midnight
Checked in for me and Thor
If not posted by midnight
DQ and I get the win.
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14 lines
Midnight
Checked in for me and Thor
If not posted by midnight
DQ and I get the win.
posting for Thor:
ill shatter your piece completely n' break your verse, whore
voters will unexplain votes, cuz it cant be broken down more
Thors God of thunder n' lighting, known for striking down
but you all around tire me, so i guess your safe for now
go'head, tell yaself your gangster, just know ur soft inside
ya Lex, you hurt superman, doesn't make you a criptonight
the fucks EFL want with you? s'gotta be pitty cuz your wack
ya careers already on the rocks, why'd they cut u more slack?
stupid herb, i extinct ur kind, no matter what ill hunt u, dear
there goes your technique,
..................so quit runnin the forest with that tag to ur ear
u bring squat to the table, while its hunger im facin
i'de feed off your verse, but'd still die of starvation
dont get mad i merked you, this was your one chance to screw me
n' jus so u dont hold a grudge.....forget it, u always drop the movie
Kids scared....Thor shivers becuz I know he fear it
Cuz I'll bench-press ur corpse just to raise ur spirit
Its a bummer, kid never drops da heat n da summer
Fuck thor, he only drops hot lines pressing numbers
You got alot heart kid, I'll give u that,you still suck
U'd have to swim w/ leprechauns
..................................To get that stroke of luck
I'll smash this kid; you being elite,thats uncalled for
And settle this battle... with a L in ya sock drawer
Dont take shit to the heart kid;better off 2 sue me
Cuz ya raps are cut short
...........So how you ever gonna measure up to me
Make your knee go out and re-enact ya last stand
Must play alot of tennis, cuz im givin ya backhands
Try me, Im stoppin ya goals quicker than goal nets
And the street workers dont care
.......Because there blocking Thors road to success
Uppin this homos.
ill shatter your piece completely n' break your verse, whore
voters will unexplain votes, cuz it cant be broken down more
^^nah, saying his verse is being broken/shattered ain't really effective, no matter how you play with the words
Thors God of thunder n' lighting, known for striking down
but you all around tire me, so i guess your safe for now
^^coulda worked if worded better
go'head, tell yaself your gangster, just know ur soft inside
ya Lex, you hurt superman, doesn't make you a criptonight
^^pretty cool
the fucks EFL want with you? s'gotta be pitty cuz your wack
ya careers already on the rocks, why'd they cut u more slack?
^^not bad
stupid herb, i extinct ur kind, no matter what ill hunt u, dear
there goes your technique,
..................so quit runnin the forest with that tag to ur ear
^^meh
u bring squat to the table, while its hunger im facin
i'de feed off your verse, but'd still die of starvation
^^played concept, ok flip
dont get mad i merked you, this was your one chance to screw me
n' jus so u dont hold a grudge.....forget it, u always drop the movie
^^blah, not really that good. I used this concept myself a month ago or so against someone I'd beaten before:, something like "Last time you dropped hella weak and I beat you / you then tried to hold a grudge, but your clumsy ass dropped that too" <- I think that's a better way of using it
2 quotables
vs.
Kids scared....Thor shivers becuz I know he fear it
Cuz I'll bench-press ur corpse just to raise ur spirit
^^lazy wording of a not bad concept
Its a bummer, kid never drops da heat n da summer
Fuck thor, he only drops hot lines pressing numbers
^^ditto
You got alot heart kid, I'll give u that,you still suck
U'd have to swim w/ leprechauns
..................................To get that stroke of luck
^^meh forced concept
I'll smash this kid; you being elite,thats uncalled for
And settle this battle... with a L in ya sock drawer
^^meh
Dont take shit to the heart kid;better off 2 sue me
Cuz ya raps are cut short
...........So how you ever gonna measure up to me
^^lazy as hell, seems like you're not trying at all :( plus this is mad played
Make your knee go out and re-enact ya last stand
Must play alot of tennis, cuz im givin ya backhands
^^ok
Try me, Im stoppin ya goals quicker than goal nets
And the street workers dont care
.......Because there blocking Thors road to success
^^ok
honestly Lex had a usable concept in every bar and seemed like he couldn't be arsed to word it right, while Thor had about 2 good concepts and worded them nicely, so he wins
v/Thor
please vote on the battle in my sig, since I took the time to do this
ill shatter your piece completely n' break your verse, whore
voters will unexplain votes, cuz it cant be broken down more
not bad.
Thors God of thunder n' lighting, known for striking down
but you all around tire me, so i guess your safe for now
gay.
go'head, tell yaself your gangster, just know ur soft inside
ya Lex, you hurt superman, doesn't make you a criptonight
dope.
the fucks EFL want with you? s'gotta be pitty cuz your wack
ya careers already on the rocks, why'd they cut u more slack?
ok.
stupid herb, i extinct ur kind, no matter what ill hunt u, dear
there goes your technique,
..................so quit runnin the forest with that tag to ur ear
dumb.
u bring squat to the table, while its hunger im facin
i'de feed off your verse, but'd still die of starvation
noobish.
dont get mad i merked you, this was your one chance to screw me
n' jus so u dont hold a grudge.....forget it, u always drop the movie
nice.
vs.
Kids scared....Thor shivers becuz I know he fear it
Cuz I'll bench-press ur corpse just to raise ur spirit
eh.
Its a bummer, kid never drops da heat n da summer
Fuck thor, he only drops hot lines pressing numbers
ouch.
You got alot heart kid, I'll give u that,you still suck
U'd have to swim w/ leprechauns
..................................To get that stroke of luck
played.
I'll smash this kid; you being elite,thats uncalled for
And settle this battle... with a L in ya sock drawer
rofl.
Dont take shit to the heart kid;better off 2 sue me
Cuz ya raps are cut short
...........So how you ever gonna measure up to me
lazy.
Make your knee go out and re-enact ya last stand
Must play alot of tennis, cuz im givin ya backhands
ok.
Try me, Im stoppin ya goals quicker than goal nets
And the street workers dont care
.......Because there blocking Thors road to success
nope.
close. not a very good battle.
v/ lex.
Didn't like this battle.
But Lex definitely had the better verse.
He won it.
Vote: Lexicon
i'm voting for Devastator. this is not my vote.
ill shatter your piece completely n' break your verse, whore
voters will unexplain votes, cuz it cant be broken down more
Decent opener, couldve been more specific
Thors God of thunder n' lighting, known for striking down
but you all around tire me, so i guess your safe for now
Whoa, gay
go'head, tell yaself your gangster, just know ur soft inside
ya Lex, you hurt superman, doesn't make you a criptonight
Kinda nice flippage there
the fucks EFL want with you? s'gotta be pitty cuz your wack
ya careers already on the rocks, why'd they cut u more slack?
I didn't see much spectacular here, looks like filler - decent nonetheless though
stupid herb, i extinct ur kind, no matter what ill hunt u, dear
there goes your technique,
..................so quit runnin the forest with that tag to ur ear
lol thats a weird ass punchline man
u bring squat to the table, while its hunger im facin
i'de feed off your verse, but'd still die of starvation
Ohh nice
dont get mad i merked you, this was your one chance to screw me
n' jus so u dont hold a grudge.....forget it, u always drop the movie
Dope closer
Kids scared....Thor shivers becuz I know he fear it
Cuz I'll bench-press ur corpse just to raise ur spirit
Not a bad opener...
Its a bummer, kid never drops da heat n da summer
Fuck thor, he only drops hot lines pressing numbers
Nice punch, played concept but nice wording
You got alot heart kid, I'll give u that,you still suck
U'd have to swim w/ leprechauns
..................................To get that stroke of luck
It was... ehhh .. it was al...riiiiight
I'll smash this kid; you being elite,thats uncalled for
And settle this battle... with a L in ya sock drawer
I didn't like it
Dont take shit to the heart kid;better off 2 sue me
Cuz ya raps are cut short
...........So how you ever gonna measure up to me
Nah, I am not feeling that
Make your knee go out and re-enact ya last stand
Must play alot of tennis, cuz im givin ya backhands
That was actually pretty straight
Try me, Im stoppin ya goals quicker than goal nets
And the street workers dont care
.......Because there blocking Thors road to success
Interesting I never saw that one coming. The closing bar was good.
Thor started out with pretty good material, but it was shaky throughout the verse with the disses and punch line creativity going from hot to cold... Lexicon didn't have an overwhelming amount of witty personals but he was more consistent with punches that weren't corny.. and he made up for the mediocrity with his finisher.. therefore my vote goes to Lex.
Thor's verse lacked emotion...lex's line on bench press to raise spirit got me
v/lex
ill shatter your piece completely n' break your verse, whore
voters will unexplain votes, cuz it cant be broken down more
................naw not feeling the opening line
Thors God of thunder n' lighting, known for striking down
but you all around tire me, so i guess your safe for now
................this was ight
go'head, tell yaself your gangster, just know ur soft inside
ya Lex, you hurt superman, doesn't make you a criptonight
................this was really good
the fucks EFL want with you? s'gotta be pitty cuz your wack
ya careers already on the rocks, why'd they cut u more slack?
.............ight
stupid herb, i extinct ur kind, no matter what ill hunt u, dear
there goes your technique,
..................so quit runnin the forest with that tag to ur ear
.......weak needs to be worded better
u bring squat to the table, while its hunger im facin
i'de feed off your verse, but'd still die of starvation
..........needs to be worded better
dont get mad i merked you, this was your one chance to screw me
n' jus so u dont hold a grudge.....forget it, u always drop the movie
...........good closer
vs.
Kids scared....Thor shivers becuz I know he fear it
Cuz I'll bench-press ur corpse just to raise ur spirit
.......a bit played
Its a bummer, kid never drops da heat n da summer
Fuck thor, he only drops hot lines pressing numbers
..........good i liked it
You got alot heart kid, I'll give u that,you still suck
U'd have to swim w/ leprechauns
..................................To get that stroke of luck
........i think ive seen something like this before but you worded it better
I'll smash this kid; you being elite,thats uncalled for
And settle this battle... with a L in ya sock drawer
......lmao this was funny
Dont take shit to the heart kid;better off 2 sue me
Cuz ya raps are cut short
...........So how you ever gonna measure up to me
.........Ight
Make your knee go out and re-enact ya last stand
Must play alot of tennis, cuz im givin ya backhands
......nope
Try me, Im stoppin ya goals quicker than goal nets
And the street workers dont care
.......Because there blocking Thors road to success
............lmao closer
ight battle i felt like lex came better overal with harder hitting punches
vote.......Decipher aka lex