peep this

Peep this shit. i am gonna be da first Punjabi rapper. tell wat u think of my ryhmes ok. Here a lil bit of. MY RAp name Topraman


Yo! Yo! Yo! Yo! Yo! Yo! This ur boi topraman.
My name topraman cuz my game at da top
Ladies want cuz I am hot.
Niggas Jealous cuz they not.
A Singh is a king!
My turban my crown.
Mess with me nigga ur gonna get ur ass knocked to da ground.
I pimp hoes in every area code.
I slap my bitches
And collect my riches
Im mutafuckin genius with a big ass penis.
I am a pimp and I got game
I am gonna get my fame

Wow...*DIE*...read some of my topical links in my sig and you'll see a sample of real shit...that was like...wow...horrible...I'm Simon and this is american Idol...Die...Jesus christ....





No....









Ahhhhh.....






Don't ever rap again....Unless you improve everything about yourself...

Vocab SUCKS
Flow SUCKS
Everything else SUCKS
U SUCK.......
God... i would lay better feed
but shit... ur terrible...

and at the very least u didnt even
go the minimum of 16 lines...
this should be closed..

OMG....this was really good, you should be an elite, dam you should run this site, no topraman for presidant.....actually fuck topraman he sucks and shoul die a painful death, or be eaten by twizted, that would be better....

damn i think this musta been a joke though for real. This is a rhyme that bill gates would come up with or somethin. Your vocab was poor, your topic was terrible and it was certainly not interesting. ELEVATE

you had shitty azz flow with this. no purpose with this, the vocab was not decent in any kinda way what the fuck? you had no type of good structure at all it was juz bullshit nahmean so peep this *walks out**laughin*

Closed, for about 5 reasons. Read the rules please.