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Brothers and Cash
In the beggining.
very tight twin
Me and ma bro, Gino
We livin in grime, but got the heart of al capino,
Haters wanna blast us,
But when then see me comin they hop on the bus....And flee,
So what if we aint got dollars,
We got brother love, the heart and a simple chain around our collars.
Gino, hear me,
This is our true life story,
You ma brother, ma homie.
Fuck cash atleast we real, aint phonie.
Gino and me hit hard cash, earn our first mil- the disruption.
Yo Gino, look at this chain,
I got diamond encrusted in the main, really i aint bein mudane,
now i know what money can gain,
gino,
See that girl ya liked, i showed her cash and at the cafe me and her sat back had cappucino,
I aint bein a meano,
Money power, Learn ta spend cash Ma brother gino.
Why ya tell me i'm squandering,
I aint hindering.. with the mil,
U have ta spend not keep it in ya hand there still,
Gino Fuck You, Ya just a stuge,
Ya cramp ma status, u jealous that compared to you am so huge,
Learn BOy,
Moneys like a dirt,
The more ya wash the less it'll hurt,
So from now we seperate,
U go to run-down r'us, while i go ta victoria sqaure high gate,
I don't hate,
But unlike you i prefer seeing ma name in 24K slate.
The Consquences, i lose ma money an all.
Brother help me,
It's nearing the end of ma story,
that girl broke ties with me completely,
Cause i spent ma money to quickly.
Gino Brother,
Am sorry for the comments i said,
This is the last word cause i got a gun on my head,
Lyin back in my now death bed,
Instead, I missin u, aint tellin no lies,
Like the prodigal son i now realise,
the mistakes i made by runnin with the gangster guyz,
Cause at the end each one of us diez.
Gino Forgive me for when i left ya hangin' and went out ta enjoy and squander,
But now i wonder,
If money is ya friend or ya enemy,
I wish i read earlier, the true money history,
Now i commit suicide brother this is the end of me for this eternity..............(Gunshoot:Bang)
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That was about as good as ja rule lol that was shit
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Lot of encouragement there, lol. Uppin for more feeds
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You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
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the structure was all ovefr the place, and multies and vocab were lacking. try evening out your lines and spit some multies, maybe use a thesaurus when you write to help get some vocab.. otherwise nice drop
Peep "Im With You"
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thanks for the pointers, i wrote this pretty quick so it was lackin' but hey thanks for words of advise.
Uppin for more feeds
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