Life Lessons

day 2 day --is a struggle that i'm constantly stressing
another day on the grind -livin behind the present
past experiences help me to learn my lessons
so now i'm never second guessin my life when it threatend
and a soon as its mentiond you can quickly feel the tension
cuz if you cum for me then i'm facin a life sentence
cuz i was thrown on the streets and raised to be a menace
to this society that filled with the guilty in a wide variety
people are always lookn for the realist and there always findin me
cuz my words are so hard you couldnt even bite em with iron teeth
it took awhile to get to the top but i never stopd for a sighn of relief
i heard about religion and i'm really tryn to belive
but when uv seen what i've seen than thats harder than it seems
Never heard gods voice or had a martyr on my scene
and i live my life Hard--and i've already surpassed my dreams
i learned to stay quite even when i wanted to scream.
got addicted to rapvideos and was stuck infront of the screen
and when i got hungry--a life -- meant nothin to me
no body wants me and plus in this life nothin is free

to be cont.................

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thanx ny ways fag.............................................

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-Play-Boy
The Optimist