Ill Rappa

Yo i need this rated for my book, but don thin kany differently of me this was a long time ago i wrote this in 2002

Yo, ime the ill rappa here to shut you out...
All my Fame and glory is enuf to make you pout...
They call me the Evolution and i'm here to rock the mic...
My skillz so tight, they'll take 1 glance at me and tell you to take a hike...
They set a date for you to go on tour...
ten minutes later them bitches knockin on my door...
I aslo got the looks to score...
You sittin there thinkin how the hell i fuck this whore...

Follow this plz:
1) overall rating 1-10
2) Flow rating 1-10
3) word play rating 1-10
4) structure rating 1-10
5) critizism and or comments

thx this is to help my book

Remember this isn't my elevated shit

overall rating 4-10
flow rating 7-10
word play rating 2-10
structure rating 7-10

there was nothin special in this piece.. it was ok.. not good, great, or anything.. it was just ok. also it was very short.. yeah and i no your much elevated now

its better than some stuff i here

lmao thanx guyz and kidd thats sad cuz i was 12 wen i wrote that...rofl

Need help on my votes. Please up.

Lol...sure can u just leave a rating? In return ile vote

Lol @ telling us how to critique you.. ratings are gay.

But yeah, i didnt like it that much i guess, the title didnt even really set me in the right mood for reading. But yeah, i didnt really "Feel" it much i guess, i mean, im not trying to shoot you down. Keep doing it, and ill keep checking your stuff and seeing you progress, because if you keep writing, you will get better. Dont get discouraged, get better.

Yeah.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=237533

overall rating 3-10
flow rating 6-10
word play rating 0-10
structure rating 5-10

elevate and get rid of everything a the end
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its annoying as fuck

and post the rating chart in a different post so it looks better

I aint gonna give u the 1-10 ratings, but i will say i liked ur flow, i think u could have elevated your vocab but eveything else like structure was good, id give u a 7/10 overall... good work.... EDIT: for somthing not elevated...

Hey guys check the link in my pro vote fairly...

arite ile hit your link and thanks for the feed

and pharoah last time i used the "/" this 1 dude sed it made my raps look like i was illiterate...lol

Uppin for a few more ratings

1) overall rating -4.5
2) Flow rating -7
3) word play rating -2
4) structure rating -5


5) critizism and or comments-had some good character about.. just too short for me to really get into

pz

nice flow i think u can rap wikid 10/10

Wow thatx vortex that was very helpful and right about my estimations thx man that was a solid