I'm so raw

Yo I'm da one dats gonna rap tonight
with ma niggas an ma ho's I be doin it right
cause da dope ride we be passin is tight
I got ma chronic xbox an satellite

Life as a thug may be rough yo
bug Sweet Mutha Fuckin J is tough yo
Dats why I aint gots to ask yo
An I be bustin caps in ya ass yo

Who is the gangsta dats gonna last
If ya steppin I be steppin like a shotgun blast
then you be goin down like a foty
And yo bitch be goin down on ma homie


I'm the type a gangsta dats built to lass
if ya step I put a Air Force Ones in yo Ass
I'm like Nelly except smoother
Like Fifty cept meana
Like biggie cept leana
Like Dre... listen to what I say

I can't even believe how smoother I am
I can't even believe it - it's just da way I am

Cause I... am.. numba one
No madda if you like it or not
Say hey hey hey
like fat albert
den go down on my tip
like lord calvert

cause I.. be.. bustin nut
I be so fly when I nut in yo eye
Bu..BuBu Bu Bu Bu BuBuBu Bu...
Bu Bubbu Bu Bu BuBuuu Bu BuBu Bustin nut

this was not a very good peice because of the elementry vocab................yo try putting more fellings into your peices and express them in your words...................keep dropping my nigg and elevate

Aight thanks fam