10 lines......
20 min..blind
..check-ins..due in 5 min....
*G'Luck*
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10 lines......
20 min..blind
..check-ins..due in 5 min....
*G'Luck*
I guess....
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\/ In homie.
G'd luck...
check.
g'luck
check it......
Just no show or forfeit use ur wicked tongue to lick the floor wit
Your name's almost prophetic... it's like it predicts ur performance
I love blood and gore, so I'll aim at tha head of this whore
And hold a grand opening, just to see what u have in store
I'll laugh at some alcohol to mock this wannabe jin
Is it 'even' a fight? Not when your Losses topple your wins
A newb killer at best now he thinks he'll improve on his rep?
Kept this doofis in check, his stats show he's still losin' to vets.
I stay hookin this bitch for making bad, cheesy music
An I'd box his rec in but someone musta beat me to it
Bust pipes and clogged this kid; clown's stupid
Flow smoothly? Not even if your dialects fluent
Got'em searchin far & wide;skills is what u lack
Done dusted ur mic off & still ur not an artifact
U Battle whack;should of posted n a alias name
A mailman playin basketball
.............And still drop losses at his post-game
Came to elevate & steadily decreasin from mine
And ur punches never reach land
............................Like if columbus was blind
Faggot even his pictures shows he's bluffin foul
Told him to hit the showers
......................So his boy tossed in the towel
Werd to this battle... Dope!
Art - Real dope ish my nigga. You had good flow and good structure. Punches were aiight... I mean really Art, I've seen you come soo much harder than this. The personal attempts were meh. This obviously wasn't your best drop. It was dope though, I did enjoy reading it but it just wasn't as hard as I was expecting from you.
Lex - This was dope as well... Doper actually. Better punches and better personals. Also, I like this structure more. You were to the point with your hits and thats what I liked. As well as the concepts... Were fresh and good. Real good flow and all.
This was one of the hottest battles I've seen tonight and no hate on either, ya'll both did dope. But my vote has to go to Lexicon... He came alot harder.
Vote/ Lexicon
Hit the sig... I voted honestly, so I expect the same... Thanx!
LEXICON- Dope verse from you, again this was one of the dopest battles i have seen tonight.....Personals was good and also you're vocab was good for a battle nice shit.
Artifact-Dope verse from both of you guys, but you're structure was out there, but i was feeling when you said all he was facing was n00bs and shit and you're right...but im feeling you're verse also...
Overall Vote: Is For Lexicon, both came dope and you guys should do this again....1
I will poll vote when my battle gets voted on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...75#post3178675
..iight appreciate votes.. ups on 1..
I stay hookin this bitch for making bad, cheesy music
An I'd box his rec in but someone musta beat me to it
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lex wtf, seriously not1 decent lin. i dont know wat accent u speak but fluent n stupid sure as hell dont rhyme. ur structure is short, why do u try to keep em in the same length. makes it sound too short. ur punches again, lacking heavily, ur verse is like a newb in second level or something. i did not enjoy it one bit, very lame punches.
art u were blah. ur closer was only quoted cause it was the hardest in the battle. u came consistant atleast, u attempted. not all of ur punches landed, i could only see another 2 more lines which were close to quoted. u can come better as i have seen in l.l.l.
well im out, lex, im finding it hard to see u got 2 votes for u, that verse doesnt deserve nothing. both can should be able to do much harder.
v:artifact
Thanx a bunches. Blah, still learnin in the process i guess. Your so used to seeing things like that^^. Which in terms the second i seen your name i knew who you voted for. Why? Lets just say i just knew. Not bad though.
I'll take your feedback into consideration.
Uppin.
this was a good battle between both people no hate but LEX gets my vote.He came with hard punches and personals that really amazed me.Also I really liked the way he used his conceptsin his verse to.He also had a great structure and great wordplay which is a plus.Artifact you did good to homie.You cam with some decent punches and personals but they didn't hit as hard as LEX did.But you had a good structure and good wordplay.But overall this was a good battle no hate to either person but LEX gets my vote
vote lex
V-Lex
He just came harder with punches and had harder personals on his verse....both had good flow but Lex had a slighly better structure...Lex also had more of a consistent verse as it never felll off....Artifact had a nice verse but not good enough to eran you this battle homie.....
why? cause his verse appealed more to me even though i didnt enjoy it either. im not baggin u out or hating on u. jus the truth n some advice, dont take it to heart. n what is wrong with my name?Quote:
Originally Posted by Lexicon
v-lex
came with punches and personals that hit harder than art .....but the verse werent that far apart art just upp on some real good punches...and personals and shuit be good..
try and up vocab to but mainly thats it
both came harder next time..
pz