dare you to top this

yeah, my mission is putting competition out of commission
conditioned and in position, my ambition is demolition
you listen in opposition just fishin for definitions
of words that i be spittin - precision is my religion
attrition my ammunition - put transition into ignition
like a lyrical technician - or a miracle magician..
time for this rhyme to reposition
cause i'm genetically poetic - im frenetic when i spit
energetically kinetic - i'm aesthetic on this shit
K tha FAKE is not synthetic, your pathetic next to me
i break it down like its acetic - fuckin alphabetically
Again i Burned your Crippled ass; Don't you Even Follow me?
im the Greatest act since Hattrix, and I Just Kill the Lame M.c's
Now i Own this battle Palace - so i Quit Rhyming on the Streets
cause i'm the Toughest in the Underground - Van damme aint got shit on me
so next time you try to battle me, don't bother Wearing pants
plan a visit to get X-rayed - Yeah i'll carve Zorro on your ass

nice flow :^)

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Originally Posted by Edicius

nice flow :^)

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word.


This piece was good you had alot of good vocab in there i can tell you have potential to be a good open mic poster. Keep it up, the structure was ayt could of been upped a lil but apart from that nice going.

to bad thats all to add.

thanx....i've been battling at tourneys for a long time now...i've been droppin free's as long as i can remember...im thankful for real cats like you - who see potential, and can respect it - not reject it.... a lot of hatin on this site, its good to see some honesty....i look forward to checkin out your posts
kasper

cause i'm genetically poetic - im frenetic when i spit
energetically kinetic - i'm aesthetic on this shit
K tha FAKE is not synthetic, your pathetic next to me
i break it down like its acetic - fuckin alphabetically

dope flow. ^