This cant be life

nowadays some niggas just not using there head
i turn on the news and hear another niggaz dead
why? because he took two shotz in the head
on some stupid shit that had to end in bloodshed
the truth must be told and i am the better man
i could always forgive but never forget a man
no other choice niggaz forced to resort to violience
grown men acting like the little boyz inside them
i was wondering what this all meant and it took me a second
to realize i was a nigga living life in the present

gimme some feed back on this pplz

A little too simple in its wording for my taste, but some valid points were instilled in there. Work on your word usage and structure.

Keep writing.