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Blind Spit.
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10 Lines.
Due in an hour after check ins.
Blind Spit.
This is my check in.
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In your dumb sig u said that the hood is in-effect
This ain't this hood dipshit, this is the internet
I'm laughin at the way u d/r Nas in ur-avatar-score
U n' him have sumthin in common, your-rapping's-poor
Your popping a gun, but only in 50 Cent's-new-game
In "text rap", its twizted, the fucken-screws-change
I assume since ur a phantom, u have a vet ghost-write
But with no rep, u'd be callin a herb at a post-light
U can post 12 verses, but u'd come Cheaper-by-the-Dozen
I'd kill you, but hell, I'll let wack 50-merk-ya-fo-fun
Don't understand sumthing.....ask or don't vote.
see 4 ur self he said if u dont understand ask or dont vote...
cuz dick cumz in so it aint no hard shit cumming out his throat...
it seems bad that i gotta merk all these faggs...
i love merking pussies but im stuck batting this ass...
i rap about shit that happens in the battle grounds...
he write regular shit he just dropping common nouns...
i'll hit u till it herts ull get merked outta ur crew u spit the worst...
to young ta drive so u riding shotgun in a herse...
my b 4 all the l8 posting...but i had to merk sum 1 else...
u so suck if we had all the ghost writers help u u couldent help ur self
You fed off my verse in the last bar^^^
tsk tsk....
Uppin #1.
In your dumb sig u said that the hood is in-effect
This ain't this hood dipshit, this is the internet
LOL.Word,and ok punch.
I'm laughin at the way u d/r Nas in ur-avatar-score
U n' him have sumthin in common, your-rapping's-poor
LOLAgain word.Good punch.
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see 4 ur self he said if u dont understand ask or dont vote...
cuz dick cumz in so it aint no hard shit cumming out his throat...
Ok punch
it seems bad that i gotta merk all these faggs...
i love merking pussies but im stuck batting this ass...
Decent punch.
Crucial won dis.One sided to me cuz of da fact that phantom feeded off his last verse.Good punches and an ok wordplay from crucial won dis.
v/crucial....
uppin 4 votes i can respect that i 4 got what blind spit waz i thought it waz just spit ne time now i know its u both write n drop just getting that but uppin
time-that was good man.......... i liekd taht verse.......your opener was good....you came pretrty hard with that opener.....your ender was good also.......you ended it out hella good.....your flow was tight ......it wasnt sketchy like phantom.....your flow transisiton was good also.......from line to line wasnt bad........your vocabulary was good also......your punchlines hit and hit pretty hard........overall i was feeling that verse......i give it a 8.8/10.......my favorite punchline was Your popping a gun, but only in 50 Cent's-new-game......In "text rap", its twizted, the fucken-screws-change
phantom-that was a good verse man..your opener was good..your ender was iught..you need to work on your ender becuase the ender is what supports your verse.........your flow was iight man.your flow transisiton was tight....overall i wasnt feeling that verse
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Uppin #2. Vote and Leave Links.
no hate times but that vote from plain thug was a bit gay.....
he proped you....but never give phanton any feedback!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
.................sort it out...................
He gave a better vote than 90% of RB. He voted for whom he thought won. I can't help that. And if u think i swayed or sum type of shit i'll tell u now i didn't. i neva do. all i did was vote on one of his battles. AND I DIDN'T EVEN VOTE FOR HIM. then i left a link to this battle. thats all. now get off mines and his dick.
Uppin #3
dis battle was wack but i do think dat crucial came a lil harder his punches were'nt dat hard in dis 1 but his structure was nice he got into a good flow wit his shit and phantom....u need 2 fix yo structure cuz yo lines were kinda stretched u feel me but u r elevatin cuz
v/crucial
yo please drop a vote on da battle in ma sig
I'll get at ur battle tomorrow^^^
Uppin #4.
Uppin #5. Don't Sleep. Vote and Leave Links.