All I Do (Freestyle)

yo, yo, checkity check...check...check it out ya'll
i'ma...bout ta....drop....drop...drop it like it's hoooooooot!

Man this is all i do no matter what
get on tha street lookin fo badder sluts
than tha one i was wit on tha nite before
cuz i aint never seen ass like dat in my life before
but first before i hit tha block wit heart
this is how my mornin starts.........
i get up after tha second time hittin snooze
look out tha window 2 see if tha sky blue
get out of bed trippin on bottles of sky blue
get in tha shower 2 freshin up a bit
hop out and just let tha water drip
if i'm lucky ya girl might suck on my dick
and after i'm finished with bustin my skeet
it's back 2 tha bathroom brushin my teeth
go 2 tha closet and pick out some fresh clothes
then i gotta bounce so i wake up tha hoes
as soon as i hitt tha door i'm hustlin 4 that caddy
slingin whatever i got up in them zip lock baggies
i'm on tha block 4 hours puttin in that dirt
but then it's time 2 go put in legit work
if i get home at a decent hour than i can record and write
but after all is said and done 4:00 AM means night night........

yo is anybody out there? i know ya'll got some feedback 2 gemme hit me up ya'll

heres some feedback....you fuckin suck...if you hustlin to live..you shouldnt be online..fuckin newbie ass little kid...everything about this was horrible....tha simplicity made me fuckin cringe..elevate everything because its very elementary..and dont ever reply to one of my pieces the way you did again or ill have your stupid ass banned..then you can have more time for tha hustle..more time for tha game....lmao...idiot

intro.. please dont ever do that again lmao... You really got space for improvement.. some bars were 3 lines it was weird..The sky blue line was cool though would have people noddin.

not bad, but school in session if you wanna learn how to really flow battle me. the choice is yours, set it up, if not peace be wit you then.

haha, every1 tellin u to elevate...and thats wat u shuld do! rhymes was too basic and flow was weak.. the imagery wasnt at all good...and u seriously need to elevate on vocab, coz ya words or the way u use it is too simple. ELEVATE ERRRTHIN!!