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hs rules
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due midnight EST.
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10 lines
hs rules
explained votes only
due midnight EST.
check in a.s.a.p
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Check, ill be droppin this evening prolly around 10.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/attachme...&stc=1&thumb=1
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LOL, dont mean to clown u, cuz it seems your coo
But everyone Nose ur wack....n everyone can fit in yours too
Im the shit, now bow slow, sry this win is not yo's
And that hat dont fit ur head...but im sure it'll fit ur nostril
Get popped slow sry Riz, but ur not dope
But ill help u clear ur throat, when my punches rush to ur tonsuls
Im the bomb ho, and ur gay, lets all laugh at this brotha
Whos idea of SpongeBob, is giving a fuckin bath to his lover
U seem confused, but listen fag, around keys ur doomed
Cause i get to clappin.....like bitches when u leave the room
ready 2 drop?
This she cock could be in D-Block but still couldnt key with Style*
All I hear from u is WACK..like abusive parents beating they child
punches leave u slump'd in the trunk like a stump of a tree
look, i leav leters out of my rhyms so i can battl Miss key*
My rymhes el maek more cense than yuors if i meixd up the lettrse/
in the 1st post i put up "hs rules"*, he gone say "college is better"/*
Strike your vision with precision to invision you gettin another L
in this demention your bars in prision for having that awful smell*
punches el make u duck if u tail*, sorta like hewy, dewy, and louwy*
chewy*, u need start ya like over, press rewind then roll* like a movie
*Style=D-block Styles P
*miss key=......miss spelled.....miss a key on keyboard.......implies he's a grl
*hs rules= high school
*"college is better"= profile says college boy
*awful smell= implies his lines stink
*ducktails=T.V show with three ducks
*hewy, dewy, and louwy= 3 ducks on above show
*Chewy= herd dat was his last name
*roll= fill directors/ppl say roll da film/fottage
DUN UNDERSTAND DUN VOTE
wow this was simply ill let me break it down
opener:tie both were ill
closer:mr key that shit was ill and funny
flow:rizzo was easier to read
punches:rizzo he had some nice ass lines
personals:key thanx to those puc and ugly jokes
struvture:rizzo easirer
vote dqued unexplained
-Tim
mr key ~ how the fuck do u win any of ur battles homie........... ur rhmyes are so basic
all u got is a structa ....... im not trying to sound like a hater but that verse wasnt well put out at all . u had no personals and ur rhymes were too basic also u had no creativity at all . so i give u a 3/10 u might have jus had a bad day or somethin but keep ya head up and in the game
rizzo~ this is mos def not one of ur best spits ...... i have seen much better from you. u where extremely creative tho and the key on the bottom was a major plus and got my attention to read ur verse twice . u had a good structure and ok punches . great personals as well. 8/10 keep ya game up homie
vt/rizzo for reasons above
plez vote on my battles as fairly as i voted on urs
rizzo won this battle easily mr key had a funny opener but all of his shit was to basic i liked the way that rizzo flowed and the complexity of his rhyme nice battle
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VOTE DQ'ED BECUASE HE DOES NOT HAVE OVER 500 POSTS AS THE RULES WERE
-ACCESS
^^^DUN wanna sound like i don't apperciate da vote an use 1 of my uppins already..........but he kinda did have a personal bout da nose thing............so uppin #1
vote on this battle iite.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=228799
key:
Get popped slow sry Riz, but ur not dope
But ill help u clear ur throat, when my punches rush to ur tonsuls
U seem confused, but listen fag, around keys ur doomed
Cause i get to clappin.....like bitches when u leave the room
Not really a good read. but you had some punches. other times you concentrated mostly on his nostrils. which loses its humour after a while. but i liked your closer and that other bar but again, not a very thought out verse. but ok nonetheless.
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rizzo:
My rymhes el maek more cense than yuors if i meixd up the lettrse/
in the 1st post i put up "hs rules"*, he gone say "college is better"/*
^your verse was an FL verse. i didn't like the fact that you explained EVERY single joke. some weren't even funny. didn't have any wit, punches you displayed were child like. this bar here prolly was the most okish but others were blah. just improve on the humour the put in ya lines.
v/ Mr. Key. for having at least a funnier verse.
MAD DRS HERE
Yea to Rizzo, and lol, punches dont have to be complex for them to be good, seriously, but its all good regardless.
if i could vote rizzo gots it....overall in almost every category know to the living man...rizzo got it
aight yo hot battle forrreal.
Rizzo- damn homie dope personals forreal...that Miss Key line was a killer!!! you had consistent flow and good structure...but dont bold your shit homie...i know niggas retarded in this shit but you dont gotta do all that..lmao...multies..always dope in my book...overall your best drop so far homie....10/10
mr.Key-i like your personals in your verse too homie..your opener was funny ass hell but after that you started to fall off...you got a point..complexity dont mean shit but really you lost this battle fair and square...flow was good aswell as structure...i think you might of understimated yo opponent...8/10
v-Rizzo...no hate
key- ur punches were never direct, i mean, some were funny tho, was an iight read, n ill read more of ur up coming battles be sure of that cuz some of ur shit is funny, but u could of upped ur punches n came more direct, n that u lacked.
rizzo- practically the same thing, all though i think ur punches did hit a little harder, overall this was an iight battle, but i think you can both do alot better...jus step it up in every battle, thats what will make you better
v/rizzo, reasons above