Quik key on why I'm so dope. =)

Quik key.


I’m unstoppable, I’ll shove ten frozen otter popsicles thru ya opticals
Impossible, I walk thru hospitals wit germ infested bruised molecules
Da new prodigal, Too logical for the human brain to even follow thru
I’ll slaughter you, Hit ya with a sonic boom and blast ya into particles
It’s possible, I’ll leave ya abdominals with more holes then a dominos
It comes audible, I can write a forty-foot article as ‘hot’ as an arsenal
My art of duel can arch and move and tear through a million obstacles
I breathe thru hallow tubes sneeze an swallow goo to create fossil fuel
Im poppin you,I can take a stran of hair from my nostril and stop a bull
I’m astronomical, abominable, my noggins more noodle then pasta soup

word.

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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=227969

There bitch.

ha ha this was jus funny... the structure and flow wasnt very good... need to work on it all but you did good with the vocab tho.. good job with that part jus try to work better with the bars and rhymes and structure cus this didnt seem like a OM drop to me more like a dam story you jus tellin about ya self... but i give it a 5.5/10

Rofl. You noob. Saying the flow was off. *Laughs walking away*

Herb. Up.

*Sigh*, up.

Up.

This rhymed very very well and stuff,nice flow wise.
It didnt have much of a concept though,I can see it was just a stretch verse.
Not really much to say besides nice rhyming and I can tell you'd be more the able to write a good verse with your mind to it.

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ha ha this was jus funny... the structure and flow wasnt very good.

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FLOW AND STRUCTURE WAS LIKE PERFECT! LOL
rhymes were really god, vocab was great, topic was all kool, lol
this peice was short but still dope, overall 9.7/10
well writin, nice job, keep it up
hit my OM up, "the newest one"
peace

i was enjoying the word play...
Punches were good, nice, not as hard hitting as i expected,
But the flow, and wordplay made up for the lack of great force..
i liked how u put it all together, nice keystyle
check out my piece on here, (its long as hell but worth it)
its a keystyle story.

wunn,

LOL. Word. I wrote this so noobs can learn how to use multis and wordplay. And show how dope I am while I'm doing it. Word.

Cool drop, I liked it. Short and sweet. The flow was onpoint and made it easy to read, this was my faveourite line from the piece –

It comes audible, I can write a forty-foot article as ‘hot’ as an arsenal
My art of duel can arch and move and tear through a million obstacles

I thought that was dope. Keep dropping man.

da flow and ryhme scheme was very good in dis joint..good shit fam

lol. up.