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Quotables
I'm smacken a fuckin bitch, capital punishment
After anotha trip, cuz acid is fuckin sick
Syke, no drugs today, miss, what's this gray mist?
Hey, kids, don't try to match up with gay bliss
It won't work, like guns under h2o, i'll rape u hoe
Take ya doe? nah, thieves are cowards, ok, you know
I'm rugged like Jesus's beard after I shaved it
That's right, I bake it like a wasted rapist
Fuck a racist cat, are you facen facts? excuse me
But your big boobies prevent my eyes from viewing this movie
Oh wait, it's not a movie, it's a car's window
Can I be the damn sky, high and i'm hard with flow
Lyrics are rigorous, so come see my dick
You're illiterate, that's why you can't read my lips
The type to have a psycho whored and
Prove ya shit is bull, not micheal jordan
You hoes should know Moe could flow
Fa'sho the doe don't faze me, crazy
How I'm so amazing, gracefully glowing
Showing I grow blow for blow with quotables
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I liked this, I liked your idea's, it seemed very early Eminem.. Which makes me like it more. You're vocab was far above average I think, even if you were fucking about as people could see this as... Those people who read the first few lines, they wouldn't see that this was a very credible above standard piece. In fact, your opener was strong as fuck. this seemed like a nice little audio, Id like to read more of your serious Om's tho man,
Be easy.
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^ I also liked this.. It flowed well and everything seemed to come together well. Vocab and structure were coo. Good job, keep dropping.
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it was decent, sound like you try to hard, some the shit jus ramblin it don't got no good meanin, some shit plain out jus din't make much sense
"You're illiterate, that's why you can't read my lips"
that was your only hot shit
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honestly.. i really saw no point in this piece at all the structure was fucked up also to point that out and it didnt have a good title at all to me... can do better with vocab but it was okay tho
