5 barz...............house rulez.....................no feeding..........30 mins afta check in............u spit first.
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5 barz...............house rulez.....................no feeding..........30 mins afta check in............u spit first.
how much is 5 barz?
LOL.........ya funny it's 10 lines.............................aight so get ready to lose
lol whatever nigga
aight so get ready to spit dat shit............I'm waiting
I Master My Streetz, Disastrous To Weaker Mc's Attackin Wit Ease/ And Bring A Bat To Shatter Yo Knees/, Im Better Than These....... Rappers Screamin Lyric Please Show Me Mercy/, But They Beggin Doesnt Matter To Me/
Im Allergic To Wacker Mc's, And Automatically Sneeze/, So When You Battle Against Me I Just Try Not To Breathe, / Battlin You Is A Waste Of Time/you Cant Even Rhyme/ You Might As Well Be In The Pin Tryna Collab Wit Syne/ Cause You Beenin A Mc Is A Clear Halucination/ Break You Off Wit A Fragmintation And Let You Know Who You Facin/
checkin........................................... ....................................dis so hold up
Yeah
nigga u don't spit nothing hot when it exits as out
cum on..even if u try to spit listerine out ya mouth!
why say u eating emcees like candy called marz
surprised ya fat ass didn't even know wats 5 barz!
it's sad u have illusions and dreams of gettin paid
and 19 broke wit pockets working at da arcades!
I know u like cool whip wit a crew called nasty dreams
tryna get nut rubbed on ya face jus like its vaseline!
ya origins point to toilets...don't u get it stupid bitch
droppin garbage like diapers in trash..u jus full of shit!
Nice Nigga
Ak-mixa
nigga u don't spit nothing hot when it exits as out
cum on..even if u try to spit listerine out ya mouth!
ok opening
why say u eating emcees like candy called marz
surprised ya fat ass didn't even know wats 5 barz!
haha good punch
it's sad u have illusions and dreams of gettin paid
and 19 broke wit pockets working at da arcades!
ok personal
I know u like cool whip wit a crew called nasty dreams
tryna get nut rubbed on ya face jus like its vaseline!
good punch
ya origins point to toilets...don't u get it stupid bitch
droppin garbage like diapers in trash..u jus full of shit!
ok closing
vs.
nothing
Lady Lyric u really need to elevate. Work on ur punches . Get multies and diss him on his name and where he is from anything to give a punch and win
v/Ak-mixa
aight ak mixa got this one becuze lady lyric ur structure was very bad witch also fucked up the flow of ur verse jus a hint fix that and leave // those out of it u had some aight multis but no real good punches or personals work on those and ak u hade some good wordplay i like the 5 barz line no real good personals but ur flow was real cosistent overall it was a prety good verse
lady keep ur head up work on structure and punches ull get there girl
v/ak reasons above
yeah ak, you took this, good punches, and good structure, lady, need to work on that, cause that messed up ur verse, i think, and you aint really have good punches, so elevate...ak, keep on doin what you doin, good punches...
v/ak-mixa
thanx ya'll so now uppin........................................3-0.......................
uppin fa some mo votes and leave a link.........an i'll hit u back honestly aight?