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Deadline Midnight Monday
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10-12 lines.......
Deadline Midnight Monday
Due 1 hr. after check-in
House Rules
*good luck*
ch check!..
you'll win? you on crack, stop lying you fag
cuz Art's wack its A Fact, no need to lie about that
they say artifacts are man made objects, but he acts like a girl
your punches are weak, you need to start hittin them arm curls
he asked me to teach him a few things, but hes way outta my class
wtf you leadin lyrical assasins... when your a lyrical ass
easy win for cheap price, this battles some sort of dollar store
you need big guns for landed punches, but the air is what hes aimin for
watch me ice you, as you go into my frees shirtless
i told him he was a Hoe n i can Tell, then he asked for room service?
i heard he was tryin to battle me naked...
...cuz hes a fuckin embareassment
now ive dropped, go put your self in your own respective graveyard bitch
coo....check also.
check it....merkage
His spits aint workin right so I suggest he put his oral on strike
His alias has seen more L's than L.Lamont's memorial site
let's play word association. CC: bloomers L.A.: incredible
T's: a semi semi vet mistooken for a vein on my testicle
Totwotoo's a herbish name and it don't fit like an X-small lid
Oh..I get it TTT's(LLL) upside down for da amount of L's he hid
Voters watch as i rep this kid..homie ya raps is all dead thrills
I'll bring ya ass-techs and i ain't speakin cats that Cortes killed
Yea nigga its str8 personall...fuck CC...im an assassin rebel
I'll attach ya fist to ya face like playing Twister with ya freckles
Watch da nameplay in da next line...its gonna drive you crazy
I took Two out lyk a doctor but dammit....it was just 1 baby
(*Looks at an ol' pic..1 baby w/two heads....TTT @ 3 weeks*)
If ya don't get something ya know what not to do.......
1.ass-techs/aztechs
2.Last line....i took two(TTT) out...as in two heads...(thought it was 2 babies)
-i'm not gonna explain everything....vote up homies
I think dis was an aight battle......but artifact had da harder hitting punches and better flow and wordplay in dis battle........and T had a suck ass ending dat was garbage....and needs to elevate flow wit punches...T's verse started off good and got worse.....and artifact jus had a cleaner more structured harder hitting verse.
vote- artifact
vote on ma battles here fairly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=222809
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=139897
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=213566
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up 2, btw, did you even understand the last bar ak-mixa? naked = bareass, and the rest is self-explainatory.
artifact-nice verse it was a bit cmoplicated but it had some really stron punches
and personals,i liked that u stuck to the point and dissed him for pretty much everythin.nice verse.
ttt-u had an ok verse, not ure best at all thou. u started with not good punches or personals, and a not good flow.
i know u can do better, just come harder next time and youll pick up the W
vote/artifact for a overall better verse
no hate ttt u good just didnt come as hard as u could in this one, no hate meant
two- u didnt really have any quotables no hate but ur punches either hit real soft or jus didnt hit cuz they were wak. u usually come wit the wordplay but nuttin good in this verse. ur flow was off an on at the end it got worse
art- good wordplay, good personals, good punches jus an overall good verse. u attacked him direct an ur punches hit hard.
v/artifact 4 reasons above
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alrighty good verse...homie...ups on 1 ..
..ups on 2..
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..ups on 3..