Playas Destiny Pt. 3

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=220732
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=221004


If you haven't read Parts 1 & 2, Here are the links

Playas Destiny Pt. 1

Playas Destiny Pt. 2


Playas Destiny Pt. 3

feelin weird bout the situation, I started to ponder her words...
same lines I used when playin girls, so went back and parked on the curb...
looked up saw an unfamiliar Benz, I'm thinkin hard...
maybe its one of her girls but i'm still not lettin down my guard...
walked to the door, heard distant notes of Luther playin in the background...
started thinkin like the rock, if shes cheatin, imma bout to lay the smack down...
crept to tha backdoor, turned the knob then proceeded in...
I smelt cologne and saw Benz keys on the table in the den...
herd a fant moan from upstairs so I snuck up the steps...
her door was cracked, all I seen was my girls bouncin breasts...
I leaned over more to get more of a detailed look...
my eyes weren't ready for it, I quickly became shook...
I seen my girl ridin him like she did me hours before...
I tried to react fast but couldn't pick my chin up from the floor...
fuck it I was pist, busted open the door, they jumped up...
the way I was feelin at dat moment I was bout to choke tha slut...
I said what the fuck is dis, she said how'd you get in...
I said fuck dat I know everything, I saw his keys in the den...
she started makin excuses but I was in a rage...
I had an out of body expirence my mind was in a daze...
dude started to talk he said they've been together all along...
I thought she was the perfect girl, I don't see how dis went wrong...
and to break my last nerve he said she was a month pregnant wit his kid...
at that moment I couldn't take it, pulled out the colt and lodged a bullet in his ribs...
she started cryin, she said she never ment for dis to happen...
all I could see was red, by mistake the gun kept clappin...
three bullets in her throat and one more in her chest...
just then I blacked out, woke up surrounded by dead flesh...
I started cryin...she was gone, I took her soul...
I never thought about jail, my life was already in a hole...
as I looked at my dead girl I felt my love stronger than ever...
I played girls in the past but Karma comin around I thought it'd never...
I held the 45 close, and wit the ounce of strength left in me...
Pulled the trigger, ended my life, vitcim of a playas destiny...

nice vocaband wordplay nice flow and sturture on scale 1-10 8/10

pretty dope ending.....i liked the first part the most..but this part was tight aswell....very dope little three part story...keep on droppin tha hottness man.~1~

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hell yeah... liked the ending... nice flow - made it easy to read...
Keep droppin this shit and i'll keep readin...
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man i was feelin the whole thing from start to finish..i luv the creativity and what not...

8.5/10 on the whole thing

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good ending! Damn this was a hot story, you kept my interest tha whole time. Good story tellin skills. I like your style.

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