living dead

yo, this is like rap/poem kinda thing right here. didnt know where to post it so i left it here.. kinda short

its so hard ta see clear when ur born blind to the light
ive scourned my life, torn my pride but kept my eyes on the prize//
the stars look like her eyes in the sky, its a lonely face in the dark
my only wish is she'd here my cries and fullfill her place in my heart//
envaded my part i jus chased and pursued ya dreams
couldnt hand ya none of 'em, i gave ya love tho an every beautifull thing i seen/

more poetic..you should have dropped it in poetic scriptures..but its too short and you dont have two links o two replys..keep elevatin ~1~

Nah not long enough really and as he said no links but part from tha it was ite,bit short but i didnt mind the piece to much,fort so of the detail was quite kl

elevate...all im gonna say homie

Diz was an ok drop but u have room 4 quite some elavation. Up da vocab a lil bit and your wordplay. Keep droppin and elevatin. RTF on da OM links in my sig.