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The End of the world
One day somebody told me the world would end
He said a week from now hell would send...
7 demons in human skin and set 7 bombs
I left and tryed to stay very calm
I waz worryed he might be right
Maybe a week later the will be a heaven hell fight
I couldn't stop think bout wut the man said
I tryed not the think bout it but it stayed in my head
The 2 day later volcanos started to erupt
I waz watchin the new a sayin "what the fuck"
The man waz right I waz scared as hell
Right now I rather be in a fuck jail cell
Then 2 days later I saw a light from heaven
Then a loud voice said "3 DAYS TILL ARMOGEDEN"
I waz in fuck shock the ashes from all the erupts burn my eyes
But didn't care bout that cause in 3 days I'm gonna die
Next day earthquakes happen and like the man said
7 demon can out wit bomb on their head
Man when I saw that I waz bout to cry
The the devil Said "2 more days and all u mutha fuckas gonna die"
I waz so scared that I could move until the 6th day
The last day that we lived so I sat there on my knees to pray
It waz so much smoke in the air it waz kill ppl before the 7th day
I sat on the ground and wonder when waz the world gonna anyway
It waz the 7th day were we all cryin cause we were all gonna be dyin
Then that voice of the devil came and said "Stop all that damn cryin"
So we stood there as the clock hit zero on the bomb
Then the world waz ended and so waz the song
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yo that was sick..i was feelin the flow and the rhyming too..i like the topic..good job
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Thx man uppin for more feed
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Bleh, this concept is over used. And the way you done it
was off point. Creative yes, but not necessarily. Worder the
whole verse poorly and lots of misspellings that got annoying.
Work on your flow too, because a lot of lines were stretched
so horribly that it didnt flow at all. Imagery was poor and the
emotion wasnt very good either.
Sub-par drop.
chea.
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This was good but it sounds like you worded some of the things wrong.. If you go back and say it to yourself youll flow good. But over all this was a ok drop. I like the concept i havent heard it on RB yet.
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this one needs elevation....rhyme scheme..vocab...wordplay...everything...keep elevatin and droppin.~1`
