The Waters Reflections

Through the flowing paths of the waves in the ocean spray..
A man see's a lifes reflection, slowly eroding by decay
a fluent dream of happiness is common, but for life it didnt show
This poor elderly human would fall down in his lifes road
Standing hoplessly on the balcony, waves crashing in the rough
his emotions erupt in anger, his bones aching and such..
This liquid reflection is clear, but the life he chose is not
A true victim of lonelyness, a man left there to rot
the foam bubbles reach the surface, creating a vibrant splash
drops of water float in air, and apparently............crash
a coincidal occurence, this mans life to the liquid forms
On rotten days this man is hectic, and the water storms
on sunny days this man is happy, forgetting is lonely life
and on a sunny day, the ocean spray is calm all night
call it a coincidence, but he see's it as a meaning....
almost destined to be on the balcony its seeming.
the weathers fairly distorted, but i see a future clear
the loud drops of water...stopped, as he hears in his ear
the clouds part away, leaving a bright sky to see
and suddenly this mans problems dissapear from destiny
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gods gift is given to him, inorder to keep this special way..
he must follow the given path, and not let this road decay

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Good piece of work, nce flow, i liked it
Work on multi's a lil more
and some of your lines didnt rhyme but i see where your coming from
not everything has to

Ummm. The subject wuz good i liked it
i liked the ending but could be alil stronger

keep the good work up man, peace
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first of all i have 2 say good choice of words, and nice wordplay...... i was realy feeling this peace cuz you really stuck to ur title....i also liked the flow....not 2 crzy, but not lazy niether..... the ending could have been stronger........but i figure that if u just give it a lil more thought you'll b gd 2 go........but no disrespect.......keep up the good work, look 4wrd 2 reading more peaces from u.........thx 4 a nice rhyme!!!