!!! FeArLeSs !!!

Not much of a topic it was kind of a keystyle
check it,

Fearless, im fightin storms so I can lose,
Trap lightning in a bottle to use it as my fuse,
You choose, ure own destiny live or die,
Sieve the tears u cry like rain drops from the sky,
Tears of blood as I devour your jaw,
A lyrical war, my punchlines are all raw,
Say no more, blister lips with my fists,
Knuckle imprints, tie u up and slit wrists,
Pain fits, ure body seizes and spine breaks,
Mind faints as ur vertebrate dislocates,
No skeleton left your body drops and organs stops,
Eaten away by maggots and scraped up by the cops.

What you think guys?

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it was iight....but you should try to work on vocab iight

^^ I agree try to work on vocab try to play with multi's, inners similies ect..
your shit will get much better but it was nice


Sieve the tears u cry like rain drops from the sky,

^^ this line is brilliant..very nice

keep elevatin

props

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