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I Need My SOBE!
the temp is pushin 90.addiction is startin to kick in
i collapse on my knees,bad timing, the fridge is broken
& now i am..cuz without my sobe,i'm not a man
asphalt too hot for my hand..clogging every sweat gland
you could be next man.a new slave to the drink
say what you think,but without sobe,your day will just stink.
it's the energizer bunny for me,the reason i awake in the morning
it's funny you see-the delicious taste keeps life from being boring
it'll save your ass when you chokin.fuck what other drinks say
it's got the splash of a cool ocean to stop a heat wave
you'd be amazed.in an emergency you won't die see
cuz when you hurt & slow down..expect sobe to find speed.
big variety.without all these flavors i'd go insane yo
fuck skittles..Sobe is the real taste of the rainbow
monster is lame yo..along with V & other energy providers
but i try not to think negative so i'll keep praising as a sobe buyer..
i shouldn't call myself an addict.being a sobe fanatic aint bad
cuz those who DON'T drink it tend to faint or be sad
it's all that i have.& if i didn't have money now..
i'd be down to rob a bitch to get cash for a 20 ounce.
keep runnin your mouth..make it fuckin tired n' thirsty
then you'll need a drink & wish you never dissed sobe.
my parents checked the label.it's flawless.what now bitch!?
cuz they did ANYTHING they could to find something unhealthy about it.
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monster is lame yo..along with V & other energy providers
but i try not to think negative so i'll keep praising as a sobe buyer..
^^ NO! :mad:
nice piece, flow wasnt all that...i liked the simple vocab, people drop stupid over the top emotional shit these days. i like the imagery adn all the comaprisosn you made. rhymes scheme was average..you slipped in a couple of good metaphors too.
8/10
V is better though.
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Lol who would think of a piece like this man... Lol brownie points for being original... The imagery and description were on point... I enjoyed reading it alot... The flow could have been better but keep posting..
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lol one piece i suck at the metaphors with good flow...then this piece i suck at flow with good methaphors
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I really liked this.
The topic was really original, and the rhym sheme was flowic. I really liked these lines.
big variety.without all these flavors i'd go insane yo
fuck skittles..Sobe is the real taste of the rainbow
..The emotion was somehow there, I dont know how the fuk that works, but overall hot piece, almost HOF material, keep writin, and perfect your style. Stay up.
Pz,
chek out Illuminati, it's near the top.
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upping one last time for the hell of it.
