bewitched rhymes

im a self-proclaimed lyrical villain//born in a cannibals village//baptized with the blood of a demon//the air dat i breathe out disengage yo body from yo soul like alex philmon//
i feed on humans//my footsteps cant be detected coz my tracks are covered with bitumen//im so undaground every rapper dat i kill get burried in a catacomb//xterminating all the female species damaging their wombs//
so dat there wont be any rebirth of a rapping generation//
destroying de hiphop nation//ultimate genocide
the end of u and yo mickey mouse rhymes//
when i put end to them//i b swinging punchlines like a pendulum//
leaving u deeply drowning in yo doldrums//
droping china walls/o'nest sets on/verbal wars/
and many of yall gonna back off//
o'nest the lyrical warfare revolutionary//aftermath of hitler's military
b the last man standing when all of this b done happening
live 4 eva like a real perinnial//blessed with the spirits of ancient gods//
coz i was the first to drink the blood of JESUS dripping from the cross//
when i spit out my rhymes are followed by sudden violent upheavals
ghostly spiritualised/forthcoming actions cant be visualised//
nobodu really knows who i am/cant be defined im supernaturally declined//
as the fusion of good and evil left many crews mourning//
while my status keep soaring//
the feeling is frantic/characterised with magic//
and the reality is static................

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this was alright I guess, good grammer yo know keep up the posts an youll get good man.