One In The Same

ONE IN THE SAME

Verse 1:
From the moment I set eyes I was engaged by her beauty
Enamored by the thought of her being with yours truly
Starting off slow with some conversing and friendship
Babbling endless, she was who my time was being spent with
I could tell she was different as our true feelings emerged
Finally made it official and I couldn't put my feelings in words
Had our own language and everything ended in no I miss you more
Waiting for this moment as I knew there was pure bliss in store

Man what a bitch, hell it took you months to pull that
Go ahead try as you might, but you can't fool facts
Spent your time writing this chick a little passionate verse
Next thing you know we'll see the kid grasping a purse
Star's just being real as the truth attacks and it hurts
She had your balls and you was the one packing a skirt
So don't get it twisted kid you let your feelings take over
Should just get the wig and make it official with a make over

Chorus:
Living the struggle with your feelings just slain
The heartache, the pain, it's both one in the same
Standing back knowing who we're wanting to blame
Great minds think alike, we're both one in the same (x2)

Verse 2:
Months went by and our relationship starts to flower
Spending every minute of every hour thinking about her
Days and nights spent just holding her in my arms tight
Living on cloud nine as I'm taking the charmed flight
Her vision a perfection with each curve greatly placed
Getting to know every inch, above or below the waist
Being head over heels before we played with thin gloves
And it was no thing to wait cause, I was in love

Shut the fuck up and don't say nothing, not a word
You were going down south quicker than a flock of birds
Being left frustrated when she didn't reciprocate the favor
You were severing her up and getting stiffed like a waiter
Yo it's funny to me how you were playing the dummy to be
To love blind to know the truth like it was to sunny to see
So go ahead and say your strong and have it set to be filed
Just remember this ain't the survivor remix with Destiny’s Child

Chorus:
Living the struggle with your feelings just slain
The heartache, the pain, it's both one in the same
Standing back knowing who we're wanting to blame
Great minds think alike, we're both one in the same (x2)

Verse 3:
Now over a year has passed as we start to grow apart
Agonizing over the lost and dealing with a broken heart
We Just lost a spark as I come to terms with the outcome
Found something special, now I'm living without none
She used to miss me so much, couldn't wait to see me
Then she disappeared like the chick from I Dream Of Genie
I can't believe it's finally over and I'm stressed with how
Used to have her but memories is all I'm left with now

You was getting fucked like you couldn't keep ya ass together
And you believed her when she said she wanted it to last forever
It was all a game as she stewed the pot with her kettle full of lies
Yet you didn't know you were dealing with the devil in disguise
Had you wrapped around her finger as she was twisting ya mind
I'm starting to feel bad, I mean how am I gonna be dissing the blind
Should have know it was over when the attitude starts to switch
I ain't talking Will Smith but you got done in by a heartless bitch

Chorus:
Living the struggle with your feelings just slain
The heartache, the pain, it's both one in the same
Standing back knowing who we're wanting to blame
Great minds think alike, we're both one in the same (x2)

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...1&page=2&pp=15
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=206453

I didnt think that i was really gonna like this piece but i did.
Im not a big fan of the love'relationship type pieces there normally corny.
But this piece was different you mixed in some dark thoughts to make the piece stand out plus you was talking from different perspectives which is hard to do in a story rap. Youve got skills at story telling, the imagery was good, the destinys child line was good, the flow was pretty nice throughout the piece, good work.

Return the feed please:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=210894

This drop looks set for audio, I liked the chorus, and the changes of voices. The I was in love...Shut the fuck up, transition had me laughing. You had internal and multi syllable rhyming which kept it interestin also. The wordplay in there also livened it up. I liked the concept, you got their tones across well.

Thanks for the feedback...upping for some more...

...upping...

Pretty nice drop. I liked the flow. The emotion was nice. I was feeling the imagery and description. Keep posting.

i liked how you had a split personality or some friend tellin you love is bullshit, whatever that was supposed to be, i tihnk the hook/chorus could have been a little better but other than that it was a good piece, wasn't really feelin the destiny's child line, but it doesnt mess wit the song too much. overall good. 7 out of 10 lyrics

yea it was good but you need to be more agressive and tkae you enimies down in it but youll be ok later on.