Vaskez (Anomalistical Minds) vs. .Symbol.(The Establishment)

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Forgot to add it in the rules, but it's set in the poll : 500 posts to vote. And we should try and both drop early, agree by PM cos thursday is ages away...
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^^it will be due on thursday but i'll try to drop earlier

Dissin me will be your demise, but it's like ya tryina apologise
Cos I ain't seen a sorrier ass than yours fightin in Front Lines
I say quit tryina rhyme, but you say others like your rapping
N' you got nothin but love, yeah, cos in everything else you're lacking
I'd send ya packing and give ya what ya deserve
But when it's time to fight fair, this coward "just deserts"!
Sym's a damn ugly herb, is he human or a fuckin ape tryina fight back?
I can't tell the difference but I know distinguishes he could write rap
The Establishment's quite crap, but still this dick barely made it
That shit might pass on RV...
.............but here we don't like fags that apply for crews naked
He says he don't take shit, even from people that he's cool with
But how can he be Symbol of the Establishment...
.....................................and claim he won't stand for bullshit?


Please only vote if you get all the wordplay. Everyone should get the just deserts, barely made it and stand for double meanings, if not ask and I'll explain in one of my ups. Don't vote until you understand both verses fully.
One might be too subtle for FL, so bleh, distinguishes = this thing wishes
Also, The Establishment is a crew that moved here from RV.

Vaskez is an A.M “Lieutenant“, yet this faggot still on the “front lines”
Cuz when I spit, you can say I “drop bombs“…so he’ll be the 1st cunt to die
I’m a “heavy sleeper”, you attempted a punch and I still haven’t felt none
Wastin “time” reppin “A.M”, cuz when you “drop”, it’s always “slept on”
This fag aint the “wittiest”, you can tell when he spit it probably isn’t him
So he might asks for someone to give him lines to write like a subtitle in his sig
They say ya talent-less but I have to disagree, I found one thing you’re good at see
Quoting those who’s better than you…so I guess that soon you will be quoting me
I see you in ya avy…so stop smoking it could kill you…maybe real soon
But I been misinformed…ya been dead…since you “dropped” I been killed you
I see that every one deserves a second chance, but I’m thinkin maybe besides you
So let me ask you a question…what’s after 1, yup you…ya always will be #2

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Aww man! The lack of voting around here sucks major ass. Considering all the battles I vote on

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i think vaskez won evry category so thatz why he got my vote symbol you need to be more agressive next time

Vote fairly on this please after u read my vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=207749&page=3


VASKEZ

Dissin me will be your demise, but it's like ya tryina apologise
Cos I ain't seen a sorrier ass than yours fightin in Front Lines
....ok, not bad opener coulda been better
I say quit tryina rhyme, but you say others like your rapping
N' you got nothin but love, yeah, cos in everything else you're lacking
.....weak personal
I'd send ya packing and give ya what ya deserve
But when it's time to fight fair, this coward "just deserts"!
.....ok, coulda made the wordplay better
Sym's a damn ugly herb, is he human or a fuckin ape tryina fight back?
I can't tell the difference but I know distinguishes he could write rap
....nice
The Establishment's quite crap, but still this dick barely made it
That shit might pass on RV...
.............but here we don't like fags that apply for crews naked
....lol nice
He says he don't take shit, even from people that he's cool with
But how can he be Symbol of the Establishment...
.....................................and claim he won't stand for bullshit?
....nice personal/closer

7/10

Symbol

Vaskez is an A.M “Lieutenant“, yet this faggot still on the “front lines”
Cuz when I spit, you can say I “drop bombs“…so he’ll be the 1st cunt to die
.....ok opener
I’m a “heavy sleeper”, you attempted a punch and I still haven’t felt none
Wastin “time” reppin “A.M”, cuz when you “drop”, it’s always “slept on”
.....weak wordplay, dont use quotations just ask those who dont get it to not vote
This fag aint the “wittiest”, you can tell when he spit it probably isn’t him
So he might asks for someone to give him lines to write like a subtitle in his sig
.....no
They say ya talent-less but I have to disagree, I found one thing you’re good at see
Quoting those who’s better than you…so I guess that soon you will be quoting me
.....bad personal not worded good
I see you in ya avy…so stop smoking it could kill you…maybe real soon
But I been misinformed…ya been dead…since you “dropped” I been killed you
.....NO
I see that every one deserves a second chance, but I’m thinkin maybe besides you
So let me ask you a question…what’s after 1, yup you…ya always will be #2
...weak closer

5/10

Flow: Sym
Punche: Vas
Wordplay: Vas
Strucure: Both

Vote: Vas

I know I cant poll but please hit up that battle link i dropped

fuckin herbs yo lol if ya dont get the punches and personal dont vote plus schiz you hatin cuz i cursed you out but w.e uppin

Vaskez--your verse was tight.....ill as vocab and your verse was consistent...i liked tha punches and personals....you rhyme schemeand your use of multis and your structure...your wordplay was ill and it def. had complexity to it..everything flowed very nicely....keep droppin tha hottness.~1~

.Symbol.--you verse was tight...it started out good and slowly started to get worse...your vocab was aiight,it could have been better....your structure was aiight at tha first and the you started to stretch your bars.which kinda fucked up your structure and your rhyme scheme..your punches were aiight but your verse just started lackin at the end.

VOTE--Vaskez

V:

The Establishment's quite crap, but still this dick barely made it
That shit might pass on RV...
.............but here we don't like fags that apply for crews naked
He says he don't take shit, even from people that he's cool with
But how can he be Symbol of the Establishment...
.....................................and claim he won't stand for bullshit?


^^His best lines the RV was ok...but...wow last u twisted his name...nice personal


S:
I’m a “heavy sleeper”, you attempted a punch and I still haven’t felt none
Wastin “time” reppin “A.M”, cuz when you “drop”, it’s always “slept on”

This fag aint the “wittiest”, you can tell when he spit it probably isn’t him
So he might asks for someone to give him lines to write like a subtitle in his sig


^^I liked the AM line..made me laugh..lol but damn u could have reworded it differently the sig line..seriously it didnt had the "hit" like i told you.


V/ Vas