Fee's of Freedom

Apparently we’ve won? So why is one free from freedom?
Pleads run, tons of children dead some leave numb
These numb now with shiver hate mind model deliberate
Picture stakes their faith stating fine god’ll deliver fate
Sinners wake to burned souls to start the ending
Soon enough it takes it toll as hearts are repenting
Imagine If I had a quarter, for If ever we’ve starved
Just sever these memories and let pleasures be carved
Constant headaches as my words passes through phases
Now casting new ages like asking for due payments
Weekly eviction notices exposing self righteousness
Took misfortune by the hand felt the lifeless kiss
Nights a bitch with a fire-arm and bulletproof vest
Always fit the description, do I suit the truth? Yes
Recruit the youth confess to extend the corpses smell?
The Battlefields a reflecting mirror of an enormous hell
What source propelled blood and pain to rewind?
Had an insane design, shit... wait I changed my mind
Thieves fight masses of peace summoned light crashes
the moment of truth we know it’s coming like taxes
Terrorist sitting Indian style in a candle lit basement
These Hide outs strikes me as a vandal’s vacation
No problem ride a camel? Be in bombing these days
Sounds better then being a victim to common cliché’s
Always reminded ‘a mind is terrible thing to waste’
Just horrible how the biography teacher’s define this place

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damn that whole verse was straight fire to me, great wordplay used and i understood what you were gettin at

Nights a bitch with a fire-arm and bulletproof vest
Always fit the description, do I suit the truth? Yes
Recruit the youth confess to extend the corpses smell?
The Battlefields a reflecting mirror of an enormous hell
^^very nicely written, my fav lines there, mad props

What source propelled blood and pain to rewind?
Had an insane design, shit... wait I changed my mind
^^didn't really feel those lines, unless this was a freestyle that line wouldn't work too well

overall i give this a 8/10, nice work

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