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Jaded Sunset
I won't stand to fight, When the world is just facing defeat
Sinfinite was never a man, It was just a common belief
When ever someone’s robbing the streets, or people calling police
Its the echo of one path, That someone halted to meet
I give thought with a livid mind, Live or die? Me decision was torn
I reflect with timid eyes, Was this a plan, or was I naturally born?
Or was it a mistake in the realm, Am I placed in a shell?
Is this really my life? Or was it just a vacation from hell?
If power is presence, Than I guess your stance comes from reign
But if pain is just a feeling, Than why can't my heart numb my brain?
What are the stakes? How much of this can a man actually take?
Is this life torture, Or is death when a being fractures and breaks?
If you take it back to the day, When my soul evaporated and died
All my hopes and happiness past, Without saying goodbye
Black cloth couldn't stand to hide a pair of confident eyes
I would have sacrificed irises, to miss the vision that haunted my life
I was to lead the strike, Young and unsure I tried to keep my composure
But I had the love and support of my family, with a street full of soldiers
Stealth like on rooftops, For revenge over a stomach of cuts
But when we opened the door, I found that Another one shut
The gang snuck in, The light and sound finally devoured us
Than with the blink of an eye, Clips an Bullets came in showers
I tried to retaliate, But fate had come and becconed
My whole life had shattered all in a matter of seconds
I was able to pretend to be dead, But I craved for revenge
A plot to destroy their lives than popped into my head
While they explored their finds, I shattered both my 9's
Blasted away at their spines, While I heard laughter in the back of my mind
Now I hope for a difference, When I look back at my fingerprints
How could such terror and pain have been caused by a single kid?
Now I seek to destroy the power sinfinite was forged with
Redemption is key, Cus Second chances are rarely awarded
So I've stopped the rhythm, Cut the strings to this villain
Broke out of life’s prism, And found the key to this prison
I broke the chains I've dragged, And the madness I'm cursed with
I've lost my force of pain, My heart took the echo and reversed it
Now I'm playing chess with god, But saving the pawns
My sun of life never escapes the sky until the break of dawn
So Sinfinite lies dead in a coffin, And I carry the weight
I'm my old worse enemy, Known again as Arias Raith
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Peace
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Pretty good piece man, I felt the flow and the imagery was there........Structure and vocab was ok too.....I'd give this piece a 7.5/10.............keep up the good work..man.
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That second link doesn't go anywhere, fix it please.
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