You Give Love a Bad Name

Well chivalry is dead... its been months in disguise
Of I trust you meaning 'just not your wandering eyes'
thundering skys will we ever get passed this demeanor
it's for better or better... not the grass is greener?
Then candid cam visions! its simply a hell of a graphic
I raped her in my mind & forgot you were telepathic
God you're stubborn and quick to swing for the fences
the minute I stop to think or give lingering sentences
murder, death, kill mode with no plead for an apology
On top of the talent in telepathy... a degree in pyscholgy
Pardon the sarcasm, not the gap inbetween the bed
Why talk things out anyway when we scream instead?
love is blind, are's could perform in the special olympics
A rose petal of cynics blossums to a bed full of gimmicks
A thin line between love and hate, it seems apparent
when neither of us are willing to meet the parents
it's my nails, my friends, my hair, now what's her loss.
distance a routiene, how long could you brush me off?
Pulling the covers pass my neck, take the cold shoulder
in todays society I guess it means we'll grow older
it's shit or get of the pod, and who knows what's next
Engagement? I'd rather get down on a knee...propose sex
That reminds me of a wedding finger, has a ring to it
And a romantic evening? invite Don Juan or bring Cupid
Cassonavo's jersey is in the closet, we simply lay off it
Date nights turning to just another day in the office

We give love a bad name...

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Well this surprised me a lot and more peeps should read this.
Very nice piece and your sense of content is cool.
This is quite an original piece whch I enjoyed.
We all get to caught up & sometimes we dont respect "love" as
much as we should. Your main asset here was your ending,
I liked it a lot. Multi's worked for you and aided your flow.

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Then candid cam visions! its simply a hell of a graphic
I raped her in my mind & forgot you were telepathic
God you're stubborn and quick to swing for the fences
the minute I stop to think or give lingering sentences

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Flow was cool here, not bad at all.
Nothing to shout loudly about here, but there isn't any
flaws either. Overall a good read, thanks.

-SQ

thanks

LOL...Word this made me chuckle E...

Unbelievable sarcastic haha...but funny coz most of the situations do have a hint of truth within them.

T'was nice writing dude and nice to see you still have the same scheme where your bars are written completely in line with each other ;)

Man I really like this simply because of the truth factor in it...If you ever loved then you know what my man here is talking about..Very true man and You just worded that in a way that I couldnt but I felt it competely almost like you took the thoughts right out of my head thats a good ass job man I will be looking forward to reading more of your stuff in the future.

Hey is that N-Demik from RnR ? mentioning
my boxed verses... lol thanks for the memories

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thundering skys will we ever get passed this demeanor
it's for better or better... not the grass is greener?
Then candid cam visions! its simply a hell of a graphic
I raped her in my mind & forgot you were telepathic
God you're stubborn and quick to swing for the fences
the minute I stop to think or give lingering sentences
murder, death, kill mode with no plead for an apology
On top of the talent in telepathy... a degree in pyscholgy

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^this had great flow...... great rhymes/multies.. very impressive :)^

this drop has great flow and structure ... fantastic... unbelivable rhymes and multies... i really enjoyed reading this.. especially more than others... i'll add this to my favorites list... great job... keep it up :) have a good day

nice shit here man. you had good vocab imagery and everyting else man. your scheme was pretty good too. keep it up

A decade later.

Lol u should write more

you shouldn't be bump'n drops from 05

That was pretty nice. Painted a picture in my head with the words. I literally just signed up so I haven't read many peoples shit yet but I'd say that was pretty good, better than Lil Wayne :laugh:.