Never Leave Your Side

The only thing i wanted to do was get closer to you
But you acted like i comited a crime
All that was is you trying to mask your internal rhyme
When i see you I find my self trying the bask in your light
But you left me in an international flight
But i awalys think of you when the sun is replaced with moon light
And the height of my day is when i see you smile
To break out I need a file
I may not have artistic style but i hope you understand
If not just ask a question
And if you dont ill have natural depression
But if you ask i can give an anwser
I may not have money like a financer
But ill survive at work i just wont take five
Ill awalys open up to like a cd drive
I just hope you know ill never leave your side

iight it was all basic rhymes so u need to elevate and keep the flo it was off and on
5/10 and im feelin generous

the rhyme sceme was not that great flow was a lil off structure wasnt that great
had a bit of emotion which is good
but use wordplay mulis and such i rate probly a 5/10

You need to get two links, to two OMs you left decent feedback on, or this gets closed, thanks.

what about the ones in my sig?

Okay. In future you need to paste them into a post in the thread though. And it would be good if you could leave longer feedback as well.

yeah best lines

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But ill survive at work i just wont take five
Ill awalys open up to like a cd drive
I just hope you know ill never leave your side

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the rest just rhymed.
you need practic
you need focus
stay with Rb you'll learn
biggest thing is stay active

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