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after the smoke clears and i've killed every wack emcee on the mic
come back with a rap expose bitch nigguz as hermaphrodites....

first if you think you ill...
second if you faking skill...
third's me getting ubsurd ...with words
using them as weapons with a thirst to leave you killed.
this kids skilled... with lyrics and a vocab
driven with determination like kamikazee arabs
the odd emcee getting even on innocent bistandards
seeking retribution ....on weak bastards..only solution
spit a rhyme making bragging rights an added amendment to the constitution
you not at my level with half the credit not even close to grad
battling me?call it colostomy!cause this shits in the bag.
off coarse i battle so the only topic left tacklabale
isnt if im better .....but how much and if its taxable?
noncentz remain capadable with any emcee in the game
so if i give you a cameo i just plugged you to international fame.
i spit flames you spit residue from a flamer
and overbite my raps paying dues to dentist for retainers.
fucking no namers always acting like you that type freestyling
when you wouldnt make the guest list on your own album.
thats right its still me...
what did you think the name change?
would stop me from spitting estranged shots
treating the game like a firing range?
we talking the kind of shots that would have BIG n PAC
ducking in their graves while 50 screams "LET THE BEEF STOP"
i'll resurect myself in 3rd person
produce an album with no rehearsing
cause i know you aint fucking with me in original version.
thats why i remain disbursing singles with only one track
cause ill rip you on the "a" side and explain why on the back.
go ahead react but your only come~back would be fucking doggy position
other then that you talk a mans game while bitching.
stop fronting cause most of you cant even think out the box
let alone mimic me with a hostory for dropping bars like i detoxed

Wannabe Fame ( 1 2 )
By Da Grinda 7 25 1 Minute Ago
by noncentz(word~p)
Is This Life?
By Para 2 15 2 Minutes Ago
by noncentz

first if you think you ill...
second if you faking skill...
third's me getting ubsurd ...with words
using them as weapons with a thirst to leave you killed.
this kids skilled... with lyrics and a vocab
driven with determination like kamikazee arabs

liked these lines could f used the kanikazee line better thow cus it dont really flow that well at the moment.

the odd emcee getting even on innocent bistandards
seeking retribution ....on weak bastards..only solution
spit a rhyme making bragging rights an added amendment to the constitution
you not at my level with half the credit not even close to grad
battling me?call it colostomy!cause this shits in the bag.

liked these bars nice.

we talking the kind of shots that would have BIG n PAC
ducking in their graves while 50 screams "LET THE BEEF STOP"
i'll resurect myself in 3rd person
produce an album with no rehearsing
cause i know you aint fucking with me in original version.
thats why i remain disbursing singles with only one track
cause ill rip you on the "a" side and explain why on the back.

liked all that cud imagine it on audio.

stop fronting cause most of you cant even think out the box
let alone mimic me with a hostory for dropping bars like i detoxed

yeh nice finsiher

over all quite liked this piece some parts didnt flow as good as the others vocab was deep but yeh overall nice piece just sort the flow out. check mypiece tomoz called "back in the day" stay up bruv -1-

I saw the replies, but in future you need to post actual links, so I can see what you've replied to easier. Thanks.

:)

Pretty decent peace.

The topic is friggin wierd, but i see what you mean.

Use multis man, it got pretty boring afer the first 6 lines......And use vocabulary that is advanced, but still not forced.

Can use improvement, but other than that....keep dropping.

Peace

another boast piece from the battlecat himself. some witty punchlines in this one man, the "backshots-doggystyle" one was great. the vocab was ok, the rhyme scheme was fine although i think some multi's would've helped the flow. we should do an audio sometime man, we've been on the same crew for ages and we still haven't hit off a collabo yet.

keep on posting, if you could rep my piece "timeline" i'd appricaite the feedback.

Hit 'n' Run.

uppin this and i will be up for audio capability very soon johnny promise

im likin deez lines...

noncentz remain capadable with any emcee in the game
so if i give you a cameo i just plugged you to international fame.
i spit flames you spit residue from a flamer
and overbite my raps paying dues to dentist for retainers.

nfl till i die ya heard!

thankz twin