elushun vs evil one

no hate...just a friendly battle...

5-6 bars(10-12 lines)
site rules...crew can vote...we in the same crew...

waitin for ya check in...

this is my check....and heres my verse...no feedin...

I’m murder you lyrically, Shove 5 bars in ya abdomen…
Guaranteed you’ll be in a coffin, while I’m celebrating my win…
I’ma slice ya throat, and contradict what ya wrote…
Putt a stop ta ya career early, like capsizing a boat…
This was just a quick key, and im still overthrowing king…
You were on top, until I took over the game, Like Yao Ming…
I’m not comin hard; I could beat you with ease, you not to me level…
You not the true evil king, that my name nickname aka I’m the devil…
I’m putting an end to this battle; end ya beneath the 6feet deep…
I’m make sure to comfort your mother at the funeral as she weeps…



Just a quick key…haha this was bad…i can do better but I don’t care…we are crew…

uppin....drop ya verse homie...and then uppin for votes...

dis my checkin

all out good battle

my bad i clicked the wrong battle my bad

listen nigga we might be in da same crew/
but i'll still take out da nine and frame you/
i rip out ya tounge so you can't speak/
niigga ya raps like newborn babys they weak/
no condom when i fucked ya mom's so you might be my son/
if rap was like da matrix den i might be da one/
yeh you in my team but da truth is i don't even feel you/
in this battle i'ma treat you like a big roach and i'ma kill you/
i don't play so when i come threw you betta wear a vest ight/
nigga last time i saw you,you was in a dress saying you dress to fight/
face it you can't do nothing you my son/
people shouldn't even vote cause it's a fact i won/

nice verse homie..yppin for some votes.... HA..g/l

EluShun
I’m murder you lyrically, Shove 5 bars in ya abdomen…
Guaranteed you’ll be in a coffin, while I’m celebrating my win…
no
I’ma slice ya throat, and contradict what ya wrote…
no
This was just a quick key, and im still overthrowing king…
You were on top, until I took over the game, Like Yao Ming…
ehh...
I’m not comin hard; I could beat you with ease, you not to me level…
You not the true evil king, that my name nickname aka I’m the devil…
definitly not
I’m putting an end to this battle; end ya beneath the 6feet deep…
I’m make sure to comfort your mother at the funeral as she weeps…
no


evil king
listen nigga we might be in da same crew/
but i'll still take out da nine and frame you/
no
i rip out ya tounge so you can't speak/
niigga ya raps like newborn babys they weak/
ehh...
no condom when i fucked ya mom's so you might be my son/
if rap was like da matrix den i might be da one/
no
yeh you in my team but da truth is i don't even feel you/
in this battle i'ma treat you like a big roach and i'ma kill you/
no
i don't play so when i come threw you betta wear a vest ight/
nigga last time i saw you,you was in a dress saying you dress to fight/
no
face it you can't do nothing you my son/
people shouldn't even vote cause it's a fact i won/
ehh...


Disappointing battle, may be next time both of you should actually try. But I’m going to have to with evil king because his actually flowed. Both of you basically had the same verse, the only thing that stuck out was evil king’s flow. No hate and just elevate.
Vote-evil king

Please return the favor with an honest vote on one of my battles. The one against All cost is most preferred.

votes please

evil king has may vote but u both really sucked

yeah u guys didnt really battle too good but if I could vote it'd be for Evil King better punches and glory, so hes my vote, can u guys vote on tha battles in my sig man ones been going on fer like 2 days now

vote please

EluShun
I’m murder you lyrically, Shove 5 bars in ya abdomen…
Guaranteed you’ll be in a coffin, while I’m celebrating my win…
no
I’ma slice ya throat, and contradict what ya wrote…
no
This was just a quick key, and im still overthrowing king…
You were on top, until I took over the game, Like Yao Ming…
ehh...
I’m not comin hard; I could beat you with ease, you not to me level…
You not the true evil king, that my name nickname aka I’m the devil…
definitly not
I’m putting an end to this battle; end ya beneath the 6feet deep…
I’m make sure to comfort your mother at the funeral as she weeps…
no


evil king
listen nigga we might be in da same crew/
but i'll still take out da nine and frame you/
no
i rip out ya tounge so you can't speak/
niigga ya raps like newborn babys they weak/
ehh...
no condom when i fucked ya mom's so you might be my son/
if rap was like da matrix den i might be da one/
no
yeh you in my team but da truth is i don't even feel you/
in this battle i'ma treat you like a big roach and i'ma kill you/
no
i don't play so when i come threw you betta wear a vest ight/
nigga last time i saw you,you was in a dress saying you dress to fight/
no
face it you can't do nothing you my son/
people shouldn't even vote cause it's a fact i won/
ehh...


Disappointing battle, may be next time both of you should actually try. But I’m going to have to with evil king because his actually flowed. Both of you basically had the same verse, the only thing that stuck out was evil king’s flow. No hate and just elevate.
Vote-evil king

Return the Favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=193876

haha i cant believe this...i was half assin this cuz our old crew just wanted to see us...so....whatever