realist aka gm Vs. Problem?

yo i supposed to set this up like 2 or 3 days ago but i got caught up in some shit sorry for the delay
10-16 lines
NO USING ALIAS(gattman)TO VOTE
no dickryding, biting, feedin. etc.
check in by tomorrow
verse due 1 hour after check in

g'luck ;)

yo yo yo vote on some of my battlez
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flower463
need to get dez closed u vote ill vote

please dont free post you dick...and dont be and idiot if you want ppl to vote for you, leave links...smh

yo sorry for the delay ive been busy, checkin in!!

yo check this for the done deal my clique,

yo kid thinks he's difficult...thinks he's a problem\\
but using 16 lines....of his dignity i robbed 'em\\
kid thinks he's real.....fuckin wid done deal\\
i treat u like an orange....but its my caps that peel\\
tellin me dont use aliases to vote on this shit\\
i dont need gattman to float this shit\\
mans reppin apotheosis like they runnin rb\\
but they jus foreign to this shit....like a refugee\\
comin from washington the capital state\\
i understand why cause u rhyme second rate\\
he puts a question mark at the end of his name\\
cause he doesnt know himself why he's in the game\\
probably the best? na he jus aint had the test\\
this is the realist...cant help but feel this\\
gattmans the past...jus a memory....a ghost\\
realists the future always givin u the most\\

Well realist iono if you've notice but your garbage and so is ya clique but i cant vote on this battle so Problem jus rip his ass up

Dont DQ Me He Checked In Like 3 AM My Time I Had Work...I Wrote This Right When I Saw It So Here It Goes...

This Time Wit Tha Backslashes(/)

Im Smiting-Ya-In-Stealth And Fightin-Ta-Win-Helps/
but see you dont need to do that when Ya Writin-Against-Yaself/
This Bitch Loves Dick-Bags-Ta-Bruise-And-Scar Quick,-Fag-Ya-Loose-Wit-Bars/
So Just Check His Battles If You Dont Believe He Rides More Than Six-Flags-Amusement-Parks/
I Spit That Fire So Youll Get Cooked-In-Luxery,Ya Shook,Touch-My-Free's?/
Ya Should Have Declined Fool Cuz Even Ya Leader Looks-Up-To-Me/
Watch When Guns-Spray-Clips-Right-In-Yo-Jaw/
And Ya Wrists'll-Split Cuz My Spits-So-Sick They Make Ya 'Contagious'-Like-Menopause/(cunt ages)
Im Choppin-His-Waist With Two Glocks-N-A-Gauge Till He Rot's-N-Decays/
From The Toxins-I-Lace That Be Scarrin-His-Neck Cuz Sparrin-With-Vets Will Leave Shots-In-Ya-Face!/
Ya 'slept on' so much that ya Rhymes-Can-Snore/
Yours 'back up', Mine-Span-Forth, Real's "washed up", like the Thailand-Shore!/
Don't Bother-To-Test-Authors With Your Horrible-Text-Drop-Herb/
I'm "Sonning Real's Flow" Like A "Father-Who-Blessed-Water"/
Your Words Aint Shit, Kid Your Moral-Blasts-Onto-Curbs! I Aint Talking Bout Sex When I Say Oral-Ass-Are-Ya-Verbs!/
So I'll Make Sure He's Not Gettin The Green When I Rip Chloroplasts-Outta-Herbs/(Green=Win)

'Nother One Bites The Dust

yo kid thinks he's difficult...thinks he's a problem\\
but using 16 lines....of his dignity i robbed 'em\\
--Weak, basic vocab.
kid thinks he's real.....fuckin wid done deal\\
i treat u like an orange....but its my caps that peel\\
--Unoriginal, no punch.
tellin me dont use aliases to vote on this shit\\
i dont need gattman to float this shit\\
--Lost flow, still no punch.
mans reppin apotheosis like they runnin rb\\
but they jus foreign to this shit....like a refugee\\
--Okay attempt at a crew personal.
comin from washington the capital state\\
i understand why cause u rhyme second rate\\
--Weak.
he puts a question mark at the end of his name\\
cause he doesnt know himself why he's in the game\\
--Good.
probably the best? na he jus aint had the test\\
this is the realist...cant help but feel this\\
--Self-glory, weak.
gattmans the past...jus a memory....a ghost\\
realists the future always givin u the most\\
--Weak fucking ending.

vs

Im Smiting-Ya-In-Stealth And Fightin-Ta-Win-Helps/
but see you dont need to do that when Ya Writin-Against-Yaself/
--Good multies.
This Bitch Loves Dick-Bags-Ta-Bruise-And-Scar Quick,-Fag-Ya-Loose-Wit-Bars/
So Just Check His Battles If You Dont Believe He Rides More Than Six-Flags-Amusement-Parks/
--Nice personal, but work on your structure. Got a little stretched there.
I Spit That Fire So Youll Get Cooked-In-Luxery,Ya Shook,Touch-My-Free's?/
Ya Should Have Declined Fool Cuz Even Ya Leader Looks-Up-To-Me/
--Haha, nice.
Watch When Guns-Spray-Clips-Right-In-Yo-Jaw/
And Ya Wrists'll-Split Cuz My Spits-So-Sick They Make Ya 'Contagious'-Like-Menopause/(cunt ages)
--Nice wordplay and metas, but try to back off the glorifying.
Im Choppin-His-Waist With Two Glocks-N-A-Gauge Till He Rot's-N-Decays/
From The Toxins-I-Lace That Be Scarrin-His-Neck Cuz Sparrin-With-Vets Will Leave Shots-In-Ya-Face!/
--See above.
Ya 'slept on' so much that ya Rhymes-Can-Snore/
Yours 'back up', Mine-Span-Forth, Real's "washed up", like the Thailand-Shore!/
--Nice.
Don't Bother-To-Test-Authors With Your Horrible-Text-Drop-Herb/
I'm "Sonning Real's Flow" Like A "Father-Who-Blessed-Water"/
--Nice.
Your Words Aint Shit, Kid Your Moral-Blasts-Onto-Curbs! I Aint Talking Bout Sex When I Say Oral-Ass-Are-Ya-Verbs!/
So I'll Make Sure He's Not Gettin The Green When I Rip Chloroplasts-Outta-Herbs/(Green=Win)
--Nice meta.

v/ Problem for having better punches and WAY more complexity in his rhyme.

uppppin

ayyo problem merked this bitch, man jus got on sum of yal aare so simple

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Wow...

This wuz clearly one-sided...

Problems verse was well thought out... complex... came with harddd punches and flowed nicely the whole way thru

realist... u came ..but ur flows punches lacked creativity.. nuthing complex...elementary performance..

v/ PROBLEM..

dont 4get 2 RTF

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